Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Migliora la grammatica dei tempi verbali, rendi la risposta più naturale e più concisa; usa una frase tematica chiara e poi una breve spiegazione con connettore. Ad esempio, correggi i tempi (uso del past simple), evita ripetizioni e scegli vocaboli più appropriati come "learn to ride" e "lost my balance".

例: No, I didn’t. When I was eight I tried to learn to ride a bike but I lost my balance and got frightened, so I never tried again.

提案: Rendi la risposta più naturale e grammaticalmente corretta; usa una frase tematica seguita da dettagli concreti e connettori. Correggi errori come "prefer cycle" -> "prefer cycling" o "prefer to cycle", e "public transport that are" -> "public transport, which is". Aggiungi un esempio specifico o confronto per arricchire la risposta.

例: Yes, cycling is quite common. Many people who don’t own cars prefer to cycle rather than use public transport, which can be infrequent in my city, especially during evenings.

× Honestly, no, because when I try to ride a bike when I was eight I was pretty frightened about the idea to lose my balance and so I never tried again.

✓ Honestly, no, because when I tried to ride a bike when I was eight I was pretty frightened about the idea of losing my balance, so I never tried again.

The sentence mixes present tense 'try' with past time 'when I was eight'. Use past tense 'tried'. Also use correct verb pattern after 'the idea' — 'of losing' (preposition + gerund). Remove the redundant 'and' before 'so' to improve flow. Suggestion: Maintain consistent past tense for events in the past and use 'the idea of' + verb-ing for expressing concern about an action.

× Yes, people who don't own a car often prefer cycle instead of taking a public transport that are not very frequent, especially in my city.

✓ Yes, people who don't own a car often prefer cycling instead of taking public transport, which is not very frequent, especially in my city.

Use 'cycling' (verb-ing) or 'bicycles' rather than 'cycle' alone. 'Public transport' is an uncountable noun so it should not have 'a' or be pluralized with 'are'; use 'which is' to refer to 'public transport' (singular concept). Replace 'that are' with 'which is' and keep agreement. Suggestion: Use 'prefer cycling' or 'prefer bicycles' and 'public transport' without an article; ensure verb agreement with the noun phrase.