Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. For Part 1 you should answer directly with a short, natural sentence (1–2 sentences), give a brief supporting detail, and avoid repetition. Use correct grammar and simple linking words if you add details.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven, and I used to ride it around the neighborhood every afternoon because my friends and I liked exploring the nearby park.

提案: Your answer attempts to respond but has grammatical errors, redundancy, and vague wording. Keep answers concise (1–3 sentences), use clear grammar (subject-verb agreement), avoid repetition (e.g., "mostly most"), and add a specific reason or example. Use a linking phrase like "because" or "for example" when giving reasons.

例: I don't think bikes are very popular in the Philippines at the moment because many people prefer motorcycles and cars for convenience. For example, in cities people often use jeepneys and motorcycles for short trips, so cycling is less common.

× As of the moment I think it's not popular in our country Philippines since mostly most of the people is currently using UMM vehicles.

✓ At the moment I think bikes are not popular in our country, the Philippines, since most people currently use UMM vehicles.

Errors: incorrect pronoun/possessive phrase and redundant/awkward phrasing; subject-verb agreement with 'people' treated as plural; word order and article use for country name. Suggestions: use 'At the moment' for current time, place the country name with an article 'the Philippines', use 'most people' (not 'mostly most of the people'), use plural verb with 'people' so 'people currently use', and use 'bikes are not popular' to match plural subject and present-tense context. Grammar problem type ID: 12