Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Misunderstanding: you repeated the examiner's question instead of answering, and you mispronounced or mistyped 'bike' as 'eye'. Give a direct topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two brief supporting details (where you rode it, who taught you). Keep answers natural, up to 5 sentences, and use linking words (e.g., 'and', 'so', 'because').

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I learned to ride it in the park near my house, and my father taught me how to balance. Because the roads were quiet then, I rode it almost every day after school.

提案: Grammar and coherence issues: pronoun 'he' is wrong for 'bikes', and 'there's many cars' is ungrammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No/Somewhat), then give specific reasons and an example. Use correct subject-verb agreement and appropriate pronouns. Use linking words like 'because', 'however' to connect ideas. Keep it concise (1–4 sentences).

例: Not really — bicycles are less popular in my country because most people prefer cars for convenience. For example, long commutes and limited bike lanes make cycling impractical in many cities.

× Did you have eye when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student used 'eye' which is the wrong noun and missing the appropriate article; the examiner asked about a bike. This is a lexical error rather than purely grammatical, but it results in a singular/plural and article problem. Replace 'eye' with 'a bike' to match the examiner's question and use the indefinite article 'a' before a singular countable noun. Suggestion: use the correct countable noun and include the article: 'Did you have a bike...'.

× No, I think he's not popular because there's so many cars in my country.

✓ No, I don't think bikes are popular because there are so many cars in my country.

The student's reply has several problems: 'I think he's not popular' incorrectly uses a third-person singular pronoun and contraction referring to 'bikes'; it should refer to 'bikes' (plural). Also 'there's so many cars' uses 'there's' (there is) with plural 'cars', causing subject-verb disagreement. Correct by using the plural subject and plural verb: 'bikes are' and 'there are'. Suggestion: match the subject number with the verb ('bikes are') and use 'there are' with plural nouns.