Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap, soruyla alakasız ve anlaşılması zor. Öncelikle doğrudan bir konu cümlesiyle (evet/ hayır + kısa açıklama) başlamalısınız. Sonra gerekliyse bisikletinizin nasıl olduğunu, ne sıklıkla kullandığınızı veya anılarınızı ekleyerek açıklayın. Cümleler kısa ve tutarlı olsun (en fazla 5 cümle) ve bağlaçlar kullanarak akışı sağlayın.

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was six and rode it almost every day around my neighborhood. Because my parents lived nearby, I often cycled to my friends' houses, which helped me become confident and independent. Overall, it was a very happy part of my childhood.

提案: Cevap uygun fakat çok kısa ve yüzeysel. Doğrudan bir konu cümlesiyle başlayıp, gözlemlerinizi nedenlerle ve örneklerle destekleyin. Bağlaçlar (for example, because, therefore) kullanarak mantıksal bağlantı kurun ve daha spesifik bilgiler verin (şehir/yaş grubu/altyapı gibi). Cümle sayısını 2-4 arasında tutun.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many people use them for short commutes in cities because traffic is heavy and cycling lanes are improving. Younger people and students especially prefer bikes as an affordable and healthy way to get around.

× Should you can't be sick getting warm either.

✓ No, you shouldn't be sick; you should keep warm.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and mixes modal forms incorrectly. 'Should you can't' combines a modal question form with a negative contraction, which is incorrect. The intended meaning seems to be advice about staying warm to avoid sickness. Use a negative modal structure 'you shouldn't be' or advice 'you should keep warm.' Also separate ideas with appropriate punctuation or conjunctions. Suggestion: choose one structure for advice (e.g., 'You shouldn't get sick; keep warm' or 'You should stay warm so you don't get sick').

× Yes, because I've seen a lot of bikers when I go out.

✓ Yes, because I see a lot of bikers when I go out.

The original mixes present perfect ('I've seen') with a habitual present time phrase ('when I go out'), which is inconsistent. For habitual actions use the simple present ('I see') or state a general observation 'I often see.' Use present perfect only for experiences without a specified habitual time frame. Suggestion: use 'I see a lot of bikers when I go out' or 'I've seen a lot of bikers recently.'