Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer simply repeated the examiner's question instead of responding. For a higher score, give a clear topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two concise supporting details (age, how often you used it, or a memory). Keep answers natural, avoid hesitation sounds ("umm"), and limit to up to five sentences. Use linking words like "and" or "so" if you add details.

例: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. I got it for my eighth birthday and used it almost every day to ride to the park with friends. It helped me feel independent and I still remember learning to balance on it.

提案: Your answer gives a basic opinion but contains hesitations, grammar mistakes, and unclear phrasing. Improve by stating your opinion clearly, then give specific reasons and an example. Use correct grammar ("Bikes are very popular"), avoid filler words ("umm"), and connect ideas with linking words like "because" or "for example." Keep it concise (1–3 sentences).

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them to commute to work and school. For example, I see dozens of students and office workers cycling every morning, especially in city centers where traffic is heavy.

× Yes UMM bikes is very popular UM in my country is because umm most popular used bike to go to work or I get to study.

✓ Yes. Umm, bikes are very popular in my country because they are most commonly used to go to work or to go to school.

The sentence has multiple subject-verb agreement and structure issues. 'Bikes is' is incorrect because plural subject 'bikes' requires plural verb 'are' (Grammar problem type ID 27). The phrase 'is because' is unnecessary and causes a second singular verb 'is' without a clear subject; replace with 'because' to link the clauses properly (Grammar problem type ID 26). 'Most popular used bike' is ungrammatical: use 'most commonly used' to form an adverbial phrase modifying 'used' or 'they are most commonly used' (Grammar problem types 13 and 8). 'I get to study' is unnatural for purpose; the correct infinitive 'to go to school' or 'to study' after 'to' expresses purpose (Grammar problem type ID 6). Suggested improvement: ensure subject and verb agree (bikes -> are), remove extra verbs, use correct adverbial form 'commonly used', and use clear purpose clause 'to go to work or to go to school'.