Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be direct, concise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense and vocabulary (e.g., 'I wasn't very fond of it' not 'not big fancy'). Avoid repetition.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. However, I wasn't very fond of it because it was too small and uncomfortable, so I didn't enjoy riding it much. As a result, I rarely used it except for short trips around the neighborhood.

提案: Answer directly and give concrete reasons with correct grammar and linking words. Use specific vocabulary (e.g., 'popular', 'infrastructure', 'urban areas') and explain with one clear reason and an example or comparison.

例: No, bicycles are not very popular in my country because many cities lack safe bike lanes and people prefer cars or motorcycles. For example, in crowded urban areas there is little space for cycling, so most people choose faster transport.

× I had a bike when I was a child, but I'm not I'm not big fancy with it because I'm sure it is not tall enough to use it and to get some fun of it.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child, but I wasn't very fond of it because it wasn't tall enough to ride comfortably and have fun with.

Multiple tense and usage errors: 'I'm not I'm not big fancy with it' is ungrammatical and mixes present with past; the context is past so use past tense 'wasn't'. 'Big fancy' is incorrect collocation; use 'very fond of'. 'It is not tall enough to use it' should be past 'wasn't tall enough' and avoid repeating 'it' and use 'ride comfortably'. 'to get some fun of it' is incorrect; use 'have fun with'. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense, use appropriate collocations (fond of, ride comfortably, have fun with).

× No, it's not popular because riding a bike is need a biggest base, but my country didn't have too much space to practice this sport.

✓ No, it's not popular because riding a bike requires a large space, and my country doesn't have much space to practice this activity.

Several issues: 'riding a bike is need a biggest base' is ungrammatical. Use 'requires' for necessity rather than 'is need'. 'a biggest base' is wrong article and adjective form; use 'a large space' or 'large areas'. Tense agreement: general statement about popularity should use present simple 'doesn't have' not past 'didn't have'. 'too much space' -> 'much space' or 'enough space'. 'practice this sport' -> 'practice this activity' or 'ride a bike' is more natural. Suggestion: use present simple for general facts, use 'require(s) + noun' structure, and correct adjective order and article use.