Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be direct and accurate: answer the question clearly, use correct past tense, avoid unrelated or incorrect words (e.g., ‘bath’ instead of ‘bike’). Keep it concise (1–2 sentences). Add a short supporting detail if helpful (where you rode it or who gave it to you). Use linking words only if adding more than one idea.

例: Yes, I did. I had a bicycle when I was about seven, and I learned to ride it on the streets near my house with my older brother.

提案: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with specific, relevant reasons. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., ‘popular’, ‘increasing’, ‘declining’, ‘environmental concerns’) and avoid filler words. Organize your response: topic sentence + 1–2 supporting points with linking words like 'because' or 'however'. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

例: I think bikes are becoming more popular in my country because more people are concerned about traffic and the environment. For example, many cities now have bike lanes and bike-sharing programs, which makes cycling easier and more convenient.

× Yeah, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question asks about possession in the past ('Did you have a bike when you were a child?'), so the past tense auxiliary 'did' is required. 'I have' is present tense and does not match the past reference. Use 'I did' or 'Yes, I had' to correctly indicate past possession. Suggestion: Use past tense forms when answering questions about past time (e.g., 'Yes, I did' or 'Yes, I had a bike').

× I had a bath when I was child.

✓ I had a bath when I was a child.

Missing the article 'a' before 'child' is incorrect. Additionally, the sentence needs the determiner 'a' with 'child' to be grammatical. The time reference is past, and the verb 'had' is correctly in past tense. Suggestion: Include the article: 'when I was a child'. Use 'a child' for general reference to childhood.

× Uh, no, I can say no, but according to the whatever I have seen, uh, in this day, I mean, uh, floated or climate change and some problem and some issues that related to environment.

✓ No, I wouldn't say so. But from what I have seen these days, climate change and other environmental problems are relevant.

Several issues: 'I can say no' is awkward for giving an opinion; 'I wouldn't say so' or 'I don't think so' fits better. 'According to the whatever I have seen' is ungrammatical — use 'from what I have seen' or 'based on what I have seen'. 'In this day' should be 'these days' for current period. 'Floated or climate change' is unclear and likely wrong word choice; replace with 'climate change'. 'Some problem and some issues that related to environment' has multiple errors: plural agreement ('problems'), missing relative verb ('that are related to the environment'), and missing article 'the' before 'environment'. Also maintain present perfect 'have seen' to talk about recent observations. Suggestion: Simplify and correct phrase order: 'From what I have seen these days, climate change and other environmental problems are important.'