Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Используйте правильную грамматику (прошедшее время «had»), давайте развернутый ответ до 2–4 предложений, добавьте конкретную деталь (когда, с кем, какие воспоминания). Также свяжите предложения с помощью слов-связок, например «and», «so», «when».

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it as a birthday present from my parents and rode it every afternoon with my friends. Because of that, I learned to be more independent and confident on the road.

提案: Дайте более конкретный ответ и объяснение: используйте слова-маркеры («because», «for example», «however») и приведите конкретные причины или примеры, а также сравнение с другими видами транспорта. Постарайтесь 2–4 предложения, разнообразить лексику («common», «widely used», «cycling culture»).

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities you can see many commuters cycling to work, although cars remain more common for long distances.

× I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The student used present tense 'have' while the time expression 'when I was a child' requires past tense. Use the past simple 'had' to match the past time reference. Suggestion: use past tense verbs with past time expressions (e.g., 'when I was a child I had...').

× I think that bikes are popular in my country.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country.

This sentence is grammatically correct but contains an unnecessary filler word 'that'. Removing 'that' makes the sentence more natural in spoken English. Suggestion: omit 'that' after 'think' in informal speech or keep it if you prefer a more formal register.