Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is short and direct, which is fine, but you can improve by adding one or two specific details to make it more natural and informative. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add a brief supporting detail (e.g., what kind of bike, how often you used it, or a short memory). Use a linking word if you add more than one point.

例: Yes, I did. I had a bright red bicycle with training wheels, and I used to ride it every afternoon around the neighborhood. It was how I learned to be independent and made me feel free.

提案: The idea is unclear and contains grammar and vocabulary errors. Give a direct topic sentence (Yes or No) and follow with specific reasons using clear linking words (because, for example, also). Mention concrete reasons such as convenience, cost, health benefits, or popularity of cycling events. Keep it to two or three short sentences.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips to work or school. For example, cities have bike lanes and there are also regular cycling events and races that increase interest in the sport.

× I think yes, because it's the sport and actually on Inter International.

✓ I think so, because it's a popular sport here and it's even played internationally.

The original uses the pronoun 'yes' incorrectly in this context; after 'I think' the correct response is 'so' (pronoun usage). Also 'it's the sport' and 'on Inter International' are ungrammatical and unclear. I corrected to 'a popular sport here' to state popularity and 'played internationally' to convey the intended meaning. Suggestion: use 'I think so' when agreeing with a yes/no question and use clear noun phrases (a popular sport) and correct verb phrases ('played internationally').