Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is natural, relevant and contains good supporting details. To further improve, make the response slightly more concise and correct tense consistency: use past tense consistently for past experiences and avoid an extra present-tense clause at the end. Add one linking phrase to show cause or result and keep the reply within 3–4 sentences.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father gave it to me as a reward for good grades, so I often rode it to my friend’s house and the local supermarket. Riding it made me feel a real sense of freedom and independence, which encouraged me to explore the neighbourhood more.

提案: Your answer addresses the question and provides reasons, but there are grammar and coherence issues. Correct grammatical errors (e.g., 'bike lanes', 'the government', and use of future phrasing). Use a linking word to contrast or show consequence, and add a specific example or brief suggestion to strengthen your point. Keep the reply to 2–4 sentences.

例: No, bicycles are not very popular in my country because most streets lack dedicated bike lanes and traffic conditions are often dangerous. If the government improves cycling infrastructure and runs safety campaigns, for example by adding protected lanes and lowering speed limits in residential areas, more people would feel safe enough to ride.

× I have the governments will improve in infrastructure and promote cycling in the future so more people will feel safe riding.

✓ I hope the government will improve infrastructure and promote cycling in the future so more people will feel safe riding.

The original sentence uses 'I have the governments will improve...' which is ungrammatical. The intended meaning is a hope or expectation, so 'I hope' is appropriate (modal/verb choice). Also 'governments' should be singular possessive 'government' (or 'the government') and does not need a possessive form here; 'improve infrastructure' does not require the definite article 'the' before 'infrastructure'. The corrected sentence fixes verb choice ('hope'), uses the singular noun 'government', removes the unnecessary definite article before 'infrastructure', and keeps the future tense 'will' to match the intended meaning. Suggestion: use 'I hope' to express desire or expectation, use 'government' (singular) when referring to the national government, and avoid inserting 'the' before uncountable nouns like 'infrastructure' unless a specific infrastructure is meant.