Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is too short and uses the wrong tense. Give a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one or two specific supporting details (e.g., what type of bike, how you used it, a brief memory). Use a linking word if you add details to make it coherent. Keep total length under five sentences.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle with training wheels that I rode around my neighborhood every afternoon, and it helped me learn balance and independence. For example, I remember racing my friends to the park on weekends.

提案: Your reply is vague and short. State your opinion directly, then support it with specific reasons or examples (e.g., commuting habits, bike lanes, weather, cultural factors). Use a linking word to connect your opinion and reasons. Aim for 2–4 sentences total.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and errands. For instance, cities have been adding bike lanes in recent years, so more commuters prefer cycling to avoid traffic.

× Yes, I do.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' is in the past tense (did/have). The student's answer should match that past tense. Using 'do' is present-tense; the correct short answer uses 'did' to indicate past possession. Suggestion: respond with 'Yes, I did' or 'Yes, I had a bike' to match past tense.

× Yeah, I do.

✓ Yes, I think so.

The examiner asked 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' which seeks opinion in the present. Replying 'I do' is grammatically acceptable for some verbs (I do think), but short answer 'I do' is less natural here. Better to say 'Yes, I think so' or 'Yes, they are' to clearly match the present-tense question and refer to 'bikes'. Suggestion: use 'Yes, I think so' or 'Yes, they are' to be clear and natural.