Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Correct the tense and make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two brief supporting details using a linking word. For example, use past tense ('I had') and add a reason or memory ('so I rode to school'). Avoid redundancy and keep it under five sentences.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. For example, I often rode it to school and around my neighborhood, which helped me become more independent.

提案: Give a direct, balanced answer and support it with a specific reason and a brief comparison or consequence. Use linking words like 'because' or 'however' and provide a little more detail about infrastructure or culture. Keep it natural and concise.

例: Not very popular, because my country lacks dedicated bike lanes and many people prefer cars. As a result, cycling is mainly a leisure activity rather than a common mode of transport.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student used present tense 'have' with a past time reference 'when I was a child'. This is a tense mismatch. Use past simple 'had' to match the past time frame. Suggestion: use past tense verbs when describing past events (I had, I went, I lived).

× No, because my country doesn't have any bike roads.

✓ No, because my country doesn't have any bike lanes.

The phrase 'bike roads' is not a common collocation in English. The correct term for dedicated paths for bicycles is 'bike lanes' or 'cycle lanes'. Also 'doesn't have any' is grammatically acceptable but can be kept. Suggestion: use established collocations such as 'bike lanes', 'bicycle lanes', or 'cycling paths' to sound natural.