Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly in the correct tense and add a brief supporting detail. Use correct grammar (past tense and article) and keep it natural and concise. For example, say whether you had one and give a short reason or memory. Avoid one-word/fragment replies.

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I grew up in a small apartment without much storage, so my parents preferred to buy practical items instead. As a result, I usually walked or rode public transport to school.

提案: Make your opinion clear, use correct grammar and more specific supporting details and linking words. Use plural forms and avoid vague social labels; explain why and give an example or contrast. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

例: Yes, bicycles are fairly popular in my country, especially in urban areas, because they are convenient for short trips. However, high-quality or electric bikes tend to be expensive, so they are more common among wealthier families, while others usually use cheaper models or public transport.

× No, I don't have bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike.

The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' is in the past tense, so the response must also be in past tense. The student used present simple 'don't have' which is incorrect. Also the noun 'bike' requires an article 'a' when singular and countable. Suggestion: use past simple 'didn't have' and include the article 'a'. Grammar problem type ID:5

× Yes, it is popular in our country, but only the higher class family can afford it.

✓ Yes, they are popular in our country, but only higher-class families can afford them.

The question asks about 'bikes' (plural). The student used singular pronoun 'it' and singular noun 'family', causing subject-pronoun and number mismatches. Use plural pronoun 'they' and plural noun 'families' to agree with 'bikes'. Also use the hyphenated adjective 'higher-class' and plural 'families'. Additionally, 'only higher-class families can afford them' keeps tense and meaning. Suggestion: match number (singular/plural) between nouns and pronouns and use appropriate adjective forms.