Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: You simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a direct response with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 4–5 sentences). Use relevant vocabulary like “ride,” “ride to school,” “learn to balance,” or “childhood.”

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I learned to ride it in our neighborhood park, and by the age of eight I could ride to school occasionally. Because my parents encouraged outdoor play, I spent many afternoons practicing turns and balance with my friends.

提案: Your answer is incorrect and shows misunderstanding: you repeated the question and substituted a wrong word (“rice”). Focus on answering the actual question. Start with a clear opinion sentence, then support it with specific reasons or examples, using linking words such as “because,” “for example,” or “however.” Keep sentences natural and relevant to bicycles (not unrelated vocabulary).

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities there are dedicated bike lanes and shared-bike schemes, while in smaller towns people often cycle to the market or school.

× Do you think the rice are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bicycles are popular in your country?

The student used 'rice' which is an uncountable noun and irrelevant to the question about bikes; additionally 'rice' with plural verb 'are' is incorrect. The intended meaning is 'bikes' or 'bicycles' which is a countable plural noun and correctly pairs with 'are'. Suggestion: use the correct noun 'bikes' or 'bicycles' when referring to multiple bicycles, and ensure noun number matches the verb (plural noun with 'are'). Grammar problem type ID: 1