Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a direct, grammatically correct response and add one brief supporting detail. Use past tense and avoid double negatives. Keep it under five sentences and use a linking word if you add extra information.

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. However, I often borrowed my neighbor's bike to ride around the park on weekends.

提案: Answer directly, use clearer vocabulary and correct grammar, and provide a specific reason with a linking word. Replace unclear phrases (e.g., “time stable life”) with precise expressions like “time-efficient” or “cost-effective.” Limit to up to five concise sentences.

例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are time-efficient and cost-effective. For example, many people use bicycles to commute short distances in crowded cities, which saves both time and money.

× No I haven't not bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The student attempted to use present perfect ('haven't') for a past situation and formed a double negative ('haven't not'). Use past simple ('didn't have') for a completed past situation indicated by 'when I was a child'. Also include the object 'a bike' and a comma after 'No'. Suggestion: Learn to use past simple for finished past events and avoid double negatives.

× Yes, I think that bikes are more popular in our country because it is time stable life which means it save time and not more expensive.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in our country because they save time and are not expensive.

Multiple issues: 'more popular' is unnecessary without a comparison; 'it is time stable life' is ungrammatical and unclear — use 'they save time' to refer to bikes (correct pronoun and plural verb). 'it save' is wrong: subject-verb agreement error ('save' should be 'save' with plural subject 'they'); 'not more expensive' is awkward — use 'not expensive' or 'cheaper'. The corrected sentence uses plural pronoun 'they' and correct verbs 'save' and 'are'. Suggestion: Refer back to the plural noun with 'they', ensure verb agrees with subject, and choose clear, concise phrases (e.g., 'they save time and are inexpensive').