Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答太简短，没有展示语言能力。应先用主题句直接回答，然后用1–2个补充句提供具体细节（如什么时候、谁给的、经常去哪骑、感受等），并使用连接词使表达连贯。注意答案不宜超过5句。

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought for my seventh birthday, and I used to ride it every weekend around the neighborhood. Often my friends and I would race to the park, which helped me become more confident and active.

提案: 回答过于简短且缺乏具体理由和例子。应先直接给出观点，然后用1–3句解释原因并举例（比如城市骑行文化、共享单车普及、通勤使用等），使用连接词（because, for example, however）增强逻辑性。

例: Yes, I do. Bicycles are quite popular, especially in cities where many people use them for short commutes because they are cheap and convenient. For example, shared-bike programs have increased in recent years, making cycling a common choice for students and office workers.

× Yes, I did.

✓ Yes, I did.

该回答与第一题（过去时询问：Did you have a bike when you were a child?）时态一致，使用简短肯定回答“Did”+主语+助动词的形式“did”是正确的，句子无语法错误。

× Yes, I do.

✓ Yes, I do.

该回答与第二题（现在时询问：Do you think bikes are popular in your country?）时态一致，使用简短肯定回答“Do”+主语+助动词“do”是正确的，句子无语法错误。