Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a direct, grammatically correct response and add one or two brief supporting details. Use past tense and a clear topic sentence, then a reason or short memory. Keep it natural and within 1–3 sentences.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn’t afford one, so I usually walked to school or rode on my older brother’s bike occasionally.

提案: Start with a direct opinion, then provide a specific reason or example using linking words (for example, because, however, therefore). Use more precise vocabulary (bicycles vs bikes) and add one supporting detail to explain why motorcycles are preferred.

例: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country because most people prefer motorcycles for their speed and convenience. For example, in cities many commuters use motorcycles to avoid traffic and parking problems.

× As far as I remember, I do not have.

✓ As far as I remember, I did not have a bike.

The question asks about a past situation ('when you were a child'), so the response should be in the past tense. Using 'do not have' is present tense and mismatches the time reference. Change to 'did not have' to indicate a past state, and include 'a bike' to make the object explicit.

× I don't think bikes are popular in my country, however motorcycles are.

✓ I don't think bikes are popular in my country; however, motorcycles are.

The main clause correctly uses present tense to express a general opinion, but punctuation and linking need improvement. Use a semicolon or separate sentences and add a comma after 'however' for correct sentence flow. The tense is appropriate (present) because it refers to a general truth or current situation.