Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a direct past-tense answer, expand briefly with one or two specific details, and avoid present-tense verbs when talking about the past. Keep it natural and concise (1–3 sentences). Use a linking word if you add a reason or detail.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was about eight, and I rode it to school every day because it was faster than walking.

提案: Answer directly, use accurate grammar (subject-verb agreement), and give a specific reason or example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' to make the response coherent. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and avoid repetition such as repeating 'actually'.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular, especially among children and students, because they are affordable and convenient. For example, many kids ride bikes to school in my neighborhood instead of taking the bus.

× Yes, I do have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked a past-time question ('Did you have a bike when you were a child?') so the student's response must be in the past tense. 'I do have' is present tense and mismatches the question. Use 'I did' or 'Yes, I had' to match past reference. Suggestion: answer past questions with past tense forms (did/had).

× Actually most of the children here in the Philippines uses bike.

✓ Actually, most of the children here in the Philippines use bikes.

'Children' is plural, so the verb must be plural: 'use' not 'uses' (subject-verb agreement). Also 'bike' should be plural ('bikes') when referring to many children. Add a comma after 'Actually' for clarity. Suggestion: ensure plural subjects take plural verbs and plural nouns when referring to multiple items.