Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be direct, use correct tense and concise sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No), then briefly explain with correct past tense. Use linking words like 'because' correctly and avoid redundancy.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I couldn’t ride one. As a result, I usually walked or took public transport to school.

提案: Give a direct opinion and support it with clear, specific reasons. Use correct vocabulary (e.g. 'lanes' not 'lens') and linking phrases such as 'because' or 'however'. Avoid filler words like 'yes' at the end.

例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in Thailand because many cities lack dedicated bike lanes and traffic can be dangerous. However, cycling is becoming more common in some parks and tourist areas.

× Oh no, I don't have the bike because I cannot ride bicycle when I was a child.

✓ Oh no, I didn't have a bike because I couldn't ride a bicycle when I was a child.

This sentence mixes present and past tenses. The speaker refers to a past situation ('when I was a child'), so past tense should be used: 'didn't have' (not 'don't have') and 'couldn't' (past of 'can') with the article 'a' before 'bike' and 'a bicycle'. Use consistent past tense for clarity and grammatical correctness. Suggestion: Keep all verbs in past tense when describing past events and include appropriate articles (a/an).','grammar_problem_type_id':6},{