Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is direct and clear, which is good. To improve, expand slightly with one or two brief supporting details (a reason or a short situation) and use a linking word if you add more than one sentence. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family lived in a very small apartment with no storage space. However, I sometimes borrowed my neighbor's bike to ride in the park.

提案: Your answer gives an opinion and an effect, but grammar and clarity need improvement. Give a clear topic sentence, then support it with specific details and use linking words (for example, "because" or "for example"). Correct tense and phrasing (e.g., "it builds" or "they build"). Keep responses concise and coherent.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many children learn to ride at a young age. For example, I often see kids practicing in parks, and this helps build their confidence and balance, especially when they start without training wheels.

× Yes, I have seen a lot of kids having bikes riding on them and it build their confidence when it comes to biking, especially the ones with without training well.

✓ Yes, I have seen a lot of kids riding bikes, and it builds their confidence when it comes to biking, especially those without proper training.

Multiple issues fall under preposition and related grammar types: 'having bikes riding on them' is incorrect word order and preposition use; replace with 'riding bikes' for correct verb+object structure. 'It build' is a subject-verb agreement error (third person singular), so change to 'it builds' (Grammar problem type 2/27). 'The ones with without training well' is ungrammatical: use 'those without proper training' (preposition + adjective choice). Suggestions: use 'ride' as the main verb with the object 'bikes' ('riding bikes'), ensure subject and verb agree ('it builds'), and use 'without' + noun phrase ('without proper training') or 'without adequate training'. Keep word order simple and use 'those' instead of 'the ones' for clarity.