Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: The reply is too short, informal and does not directly answer with a clear topic sentence or supporting detail. Expand to a full sentence, give a brief reason or memory, and use natural but polite language. Keep your answer to no more than 4–5 sentences and use linking words if you add details.

例: I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school because my family lived nearby, and my parents thought walking was safer. Occasionally I borrowed a neighbour’s bike, but I never owned one myself.

提案: The answer is unclear, ungrammatical and vague. Provide a clear topic sentence stating whether bikes are popular, then give 1–2 specific reasons or examples, using linking words such as "because", "however" or "for example" to organize your ideas.

例: Yes, bikes are fairly popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. However, they are more common in smaller towns than in big cities, where traffic and long distances make cars and public transport more practical.

× No way.

✓ No, I didn't.

The original reply 'No way.' is informal and does not directly answer the past tense question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?'. This is a sentence structure issue: the response should mirror the question's tense and include a verb. Use a complete negative past simple sentence 'No, I didn't' or 'No, I didn't have one.' to clearly and grammatically answer the examiner's question.

× Only thing it's kinda popular but in a bit it's like.

✓ The only thing is that bikes are somewhat popular, but only in certain areas.

The original sentence is fragmented, uses informal contractions ('kinda'), and mixes pronouns and tense awkwardly ('it's' twice) leading to unclear meaning. This is primarily a sentence structure error and also involves incorrect pronoun reference and tense/consistency. Provide a complete, formal sentence that matches the present-tense question 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' For clarity, use 'The only thing is that bikes are somewhat popular, but only in certain areas.' Specific suggestion: avoid contractions and filler phrases ('kinda', 'it's like'); state the subject ('bikes') and a clear adverb or qualifier ('somewhat', 'in certain areas').