Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Сформулируйте ответ грамматически правильно и более естественно. Начните с чёткой тематической фразы в прошедшем времени, затем добавьте краткое уточнение о настоящем. Избегайте повторов и лишних слов. Например, используйте одно-два дополнительных предложения с пояснением (почему или как часто вы её использовали).

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I still own one now. I used to ride it to visit friends and explore the neighborhood, which helped me enjoy outdoor activities regularly.

提案: Улучшите грамматику и связность ответа: используйте правильную форму глагола и добавьте конкретные детали. Свяжите предложения с помощью слов-связок (for example, because, therefore). Избегайте пауз и слов-паразитов. Уточните, какие «места» вы имеете в виду (велодорожки, парки, улицы) и приведите причину популярности.

例: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient. For example, many couriers use them in cities, and there are numerous bike lanes and parks that make cycling safe and pleasant.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child and now I have a bike too.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child, and now I have one too.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. 'When I was a child' requires past tense 'had'. Use 'one' to avoid repetition. Suggestion: keep consistent tense and use pronouns to avoid repeating nouns.

× Yes, in my country bikes is uh, a very popular type of uh, transport.

✓ Yes, in my country bikes are a very popular form of transport.

Plural subject 'bikes' requires plural verb 'are'. Also 'type of transport' is better as 'form of transport'. Suggestion: ensure verb agrees with subject number and choose appropriate collocations.

× A lot of couriers uh, use it and uh uh, there are a lot of place.

✓ A lot of couriers use them, and there are a lot of places.

'Use it' is incorrect because 'bikes' is plural, so use plural pronoun 'them'. 'Place' should be plural 'places' to match 'a lot of'. Also article and number agreement needed. Suggestion: match pronouns to noun number and pluralize nouns after 'a lot of'.