Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Говорите более чётко и грамматично: дайте прямой ответ, затем короткое объяснение. Избегайте пауз с «uh» и лишних слов; используйте простые времена и правильную структуру предложения. Укажите точный возраст и последовательность событий, добавьте одно-два конкретных факта.

例: No, I didn't have a bike as a child. I only learned to ride a bicycle much later, when I was about 18, so I never owned one growing up.

提案: Давайте прямой ответ и затем конкретное объяснение с примером. Уменьшите количество слов-паразитов («uh», «umm»), используйте связки (for example, because, therefore). Уточните степень популярности и назовите конкретные причины или ситуации, когда велосипеды всё же используются.

例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer cars or public transport like the metro and buses. For example, in big cities cycling is uncommon due to heavy traffic and limited bike lanes.

× Oh, no, because when I was, uh, a child, I couldn't, uh, drive bike, uh, just I learned to bike bicycle were late in my 18 Uh, that's why I didn't have a bike when I was a child and.

✓ Oh no. When I was a child I couldn't ride a bike; I only learned to ride a bicycle when I was 18. That's why I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The original sentence mixes tenses and contains incorrect verb choices and word order. Use past simple consistently for past facts: 'couldn't ride' (not 'drive bike'), 'learned to ride' (not 'learned to bike bicycle were late in my 18'), and the time phrase should be 'when I was 18'. Also separate ideas into clearer clauses or sentences. Suggestion: practice past simple verbs and common collocations like 'ride a bike' and correct placement of time expressions (e.g., 'when I was 18').

× I think uh, not because in my country, uh, more of people prefer uh, to drive a car or go somewhere with umm, metro or bus. Uh, that's why my.

✓ I don't think so, because in my country most people prefer to drive a car or travel by metro or bus.

The phrase 'more of people' is incorrect; use 'most people' or 'more people'. Also use 'travel by' for public transport and remove filler words. Ensure the sentence completes the idea; 'That's why my.' is incomplete and should be omitted. Suggestion: replace 'more of people' with 'most people' and use correct preposition 'by' with modes of transport, and always finish the sentence with a clear subject or conclusion.