Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Lỗi chính ở phát âm và từ vựng dẫn đến câu trả lời không có nội dung trả lời. Hãy chú ý phát âm chính xác (bike ≠ pie; child ≠ chill) và trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề, rồi thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết. Ví dụ cụ thể: nêu có hay không, tuổi khi có, tần suất sử dụng, hoặc kỷ niệm ngắn liên quan.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it for my seventh birthday and rode it every weekend around the neighborhood. I remember learning to balance with my father’s help, which made me more confident and independent.

提案: Câu trả lời là lặp lại câu hỏi và có lỗi phát âm (bikes ≠ by). Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, rồi hỗ trợ bằng lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể (ví dụ: thành phố có đường cho xe đạp, xu hướng thể thao, vấn đề giao thông). Sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý (because, however, for example).

例: Yes, I think bikes are fairly popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities there are bike lanes and rental schemes, although car ownership is still increasing in rural areas.

× Did you have a pie when you were a chill?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student used the wrong words 'pie' and 'chill' instead of 'bike' and 'child'. This is a word choice/spelling error that makes the sentence nonsensical. Suggestion: listen carefully to the examiner's question and use the correct nouns; check spelling: 'bike' and 'child'. Also ensure the sentence matches the past tense question form 'Did you have...'? Use the base form of the verb after 'did'.

× Do you think by are popular in the country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The student wrote 'by' instead of 'bikes' and omitted the possessive 'your'. This is a word choice/spelling and sentence completeness issue. Suggestion: use the correct plural noun 'bikes' and include the appropriate determiner 'your' to match the examiner's question. The structure 'Do you think [plural noun] are popular in your country?' is correct for asking about general popularity.