Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more precise, natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid incorrect metaphors ("learn how to walk") and grammar errors ("It's easy to help me").

例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small bicycle when I was about six, and I used it almost every day. As a result, I learned to balance quickly and gained confidence riding on roads near my home.

提案: Give a direct answer, then support it with specific examples and correct grammar. Use linking words (for example, because, therefore) and correct noun forms ("schools", "ride bikes"). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many children ride bikes to school because it is cheaper and more convenient than taking a car. Therefore, parents do not need to wake up early to drive them, and traffic near schools is often lighter.

× When I was young, my parents bought a small bicycle for me. It's easy to help me to learn how to walk.

✓ When I was young, my parents bought a small bicycle for me. It was easy for me to learn how to ride it.

The first sentence is fine (correct past tense). The second sentence mixes present 'It's' with a past context and uses incorrect verb 'walk' for bicycle. This is a past tense issue and verb choice. Use past 'was' to match the time frame and use 'ride' for bicycles; use the correct pattern 'easy for someone to do something.' Suggestion: keep tense consistent by using past forms when referring to childhood events and use correct verb collocations.

× Yeah, it's very popular in my country.

✓ Yeah, they're very popular in my country.

'Bikes' is plural, so the pronoun and verb should be plural. Using 'it's' (it is) incorrectly refers to a singular noun. Change to 'they're' (they are) to agree with the plural subject 'bikes.'

× Lots of people will ride a bike to the school and they don't need parents to get up earlier to take them to school.

✓ Lots of people ride bikes to school and they don't need their parents to get up earlier to take them there.

Several issues: modal/future 'will' is unnecessary when speaking about habitual actions, so use simple present 'ride' (present tense issue but also sentence structure). 'A bike' should be plural 'bikes' when paired with 'lots of people.' 'The school' is unnecessary; use 'school' for general activity. Pronoun reference: 'parents' should be 'their parents' to show possession (incorrect use of pronouns). Also use 'there' instead of repeating 'to school.' Suggestions: use simple present for routines, match plural nouns, include possessive pronouns, and avoid redundant articles.