Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 質問を繰り返すのではなく、直接答えを述べ、簡潔な主題文と必要ならば1〜2の具体的な補足を加えてください。発音の流暢さを改善し、非流暢要素（「あの」「えーと」など）を減らし、文法（主語と動詞の一致）に注意してください。例えば過去形で『Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about eight.』のように答えます。

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about eight, and I often rode it to my friend’s house. Because my neighborhood was quiet and safe, I felt free to cycle every afternoon.

提案: まずははっきりと意見を述べ、その後に具体例や理由を1〜2文で述べてください。文法的な誤り（主語と動詞の一致、名詞の誤用）を直し、冗長なフィラーを避けて流暢に話す練習をしてください。リンク語（because, for example, therefore）を使って論理を明確にすると良いです。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many students and commuters use them for short trips. For example, at my school a lot of students cycle to class since it is cheap and convenient.

× Oh yes, I do. Uh, I always say, uh, people who likes bikes in my school.

✓ Oh yes, I do. Uh, I always say, uh, people who like bikes at my school.

The verb 'like' must agree with the plural subject 'people', so use 'like' instead of 'likes'. Also 'in my school' is acceptable but 'at my school' is more natural for referring to people who attend the school. Suggestion: identify the subject number (singular/plural) and match the verb form accordingly, and use 'at' with institutions when talking about people associated with them.

× So that's why I think the bags are popular in my country.

✓ So that's why I think bikes are popular in my country.

The word 'bags' is likely a wrong plural noun here; the intended subject is 'bikes'. This is a lexical error rather than grammatical number mismatch, but it causes meaning confusion. Suggestion: check that the noun refers to the intended item and remains consistent with previous sentences; use 'bikes' (plural) to match general statement about popularity.