Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời chưa trả lời đúng câu hỏi và có lỗi ngữ pháp; bạn cần trả lời trực tiếp (Có/Không) bằng thì quá khứ nếu hỏi về quá khứ, sau đó bổ sung 1-2 câu giải thích ngắn. Tránh nói lạc đề (ví dụ ‘mic’ không liên quan). Sử dụng liên từ đơn giản để mở rộng, ví dụ: “because” hoặc “but”.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I usually walked to school with my friends because my family lived nearby. However, I sometimes borrowed a bike from my cousin at weekends to ride in the park.

提案: Câu trả lời có ý chính nhưng thiếu mạch lạc, nhiều lỗi từ vựng và phát âm dẫn đến hiểu nhầm (ví dụ: ‘bar’ hoặc ‘barcode’). Hãy mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó dùng 1-2 câu chi tiết cụ thể và liên từ hợp lý (e.g. 'for example', 'because', 'also'). Tránh lặp từ, dùng từ đúng ngữ cảnh như 'bicycle' hoặc 'bike lanes'.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country. For example, many older people ride bikes for exercise in the mornings, and children often cycle to school because it is cheap and convenient. Also, cities with bike lanes encourage more people to use bicycles for short trips.

× No, I don't have mic.

✓ No, I didn't have a mic.

The question asks about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. 'Do not have' is present tense; correct past form is 'did not have'. Also use the article 'a' before 'mic' and preferably 'microphone' for formality. Suggestion: say 'No, I didn't have a microphone.'

× Yes, I need, I think uh, the bar is very popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country.

The student used 'need' incorrectly; the examiner asked a general opinion so use present simple 'I think'. 'The bar' is incorrect word choice—likely intended 'bikes'. Use plural 'bikes' for general statements. Suggestion: say 'Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country.'

× For example, uh, everyone can exercise, want to do exercise, the older people want to do exercise in the morning and some the children go to school by barcode.

✓ For example, everyone can exercise: older people exercise in the morning, and some children go to school by bike.

This sentence has multiple issues: redundant phrases ('can exercise, want to do exercise') and incorrect word 'barcode' instead of 'bike'. Remove redundancy and improve structure by splitting into clearer clauses. Use plural 'children' without 'the' and use 'by bike' to indicate transport. Suggestion: say 'For example, everyone can exercise: older people exercise in the morning, and some children go to school by bike.'