Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn cần sửa ngữ pháp cơ bản (thì và chia động từ), cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn và thêm chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh lỗi cơ bản như “This I do” — nên dùng quá khứ đơn. Giữ câu ngắn gọn, tối đa 3–4 câu, bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề, rồi thêm 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ với liên từ thích hợp.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it with my brother around our neighborhood. We usually cycled to the park on weekends, which was fun and helped us stay active.

提案: Bạn cần trả lời trực tiếp và đầy đủ: sửa ngữ pháp, dùng từ đúng (bike, not pie), đưa lý do cụ thể và dùng liên từ để kết nối ý. Tránh câu ngắt quãng và thiếu thông tin. Nên nêu quan điểm, lý do, và có thể so sánh hoặc đưa ví dụ ngắn.

例: No, I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. Most people prefer cars or motorbikes because they are faster and more convenient. However, bicycles are becoming more common in some cities where there are bike lanes.

× This I do when I was a child.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and tense mismatch. 'This I do' is ungrammatical for describing a past possession. Use 'I had a bike' to indicate possession in the past, and keep 'when I was a child' unchanged. Suggestion: place subject 'I' before the verb and use the past tense verb 'had' to match the past time reference.

× I usually ride a bike with my brother.

✓ I usually rode a bike with my brother when I was a child.

The verb tense is inconsistent with the past time frame established by the question. 'Usually ride' is present habitual, but the question asks about childhood (past). Change the verb to the past habitual 'usually rode' and add 'when I was a child' to make the time reference clear. Suggestion: match verb tense to the time expression.

× No, I don't because.

✓ No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country.

The fragment 'No, I don't because.' is incomplete and lacks an object or clause explaining what is being negated. The response should directly address the question. Use 'I don't think' plus the clause stating the opinion. Suggestion: avoid incomplete clauses; complete the thought after negation.

× I don't see the pie are popular in my country.

✓ I don't think bikes are popular in my country.

The sentence has multiple errors: misuse of 'see' instead of 'think', incorrect word 'pie' instead of 'bikes', and subject-verb agreement issue with 'are' after a singular/plural mismatch. The corrected sentence uses 'I don't think' followed by the clause 'bikes are popular' which agrees in number. Suggestion: use the correct noun 'bikes' and the verb 'are' to agree with the plural subject, and use 'think' to express opinion.