Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn đã lặp lại câu hỏi của giám khảo thay vì trả lời. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp với một câu chủ đề và nếu cần thêm chi tiết, bổ sung tối đa 1–2 câu hỗ trợ. Sử dụng từ nối khi đưa thêm thông tin (ví dụ: although, because, so). Cố gắng giữ tối đa 5 câu và dùng từ vựng đơn giản nhưng chính xác.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was about seven. It was a small red bicycle my parents bought for me, and I used to ride it around the neighborhood every afternoon. Because the roads were quiet, I learned to ride quickly and felt very independent.

提案: Bạn chỉ lặp lại câu hỏi thay vì đưa ra ý kiến. Hãy nêu quan điểm trực tiếp trong câu đầu tiên, rồi giải thích lý do với 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể. Dùng liên từ (for example, because, however) để làm rõ lập luận và tránh trả lời quá ngắn hoặc quá dài.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people use them for short trips or exercise because they are cheap and convenient; for example, students often cycle to school to avoid traffic.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering; this is a sentence structure/response error. Provide a full declarative sentence as an answer in the past tense to match the question. Use 'had' (past simple) for possession in the past. Example improvement: start with yes/no or a full statement and include brief details: 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.' or 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.'

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of giving an answer; this is effectively a response structure problem and relates to tense usage. Provide a full declarative sentence in the present simple to match the question. Use 'think' (present simple) for current opinion and keep 'are popular' for general truth. Suggestion: answer directly and optionally add a reason: 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because many people use them for short trips.'