Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve grammar, produce a clear topic sentence, and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Use past tense and correct word order. Keep answer natural and concise (1–3 sentences).

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school or took the bus, so I didn’t learn to ride until I was a teenager.

提案: Fix vocabulary error and give a specific reason or example with linking words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then support it with a reason (e.g., environment, traffic, cost). Stay within 1–3 sentences and avoid repetition.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them to avoid traffic and save money. For example, commuters in large cities often cycle short distances, especially during rush hour.

× I have no bike when I was a child.

✓ I had no bike when I was a child.

The sentence uses present tense 'have' but the context is past ('when I was a child'). This is a tense error. Use past tense 'had' to match the time frame. Suggestion: use past tense verbs for actions or states that occurred in the past (e.g., 'I had', 'I lived').

× Yes, our country bags are popular in our country.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in our country.

The sentence repeats 'our country' and uses 'bags' which is likely a wrong word choice; structurally it is confusing. The question asks about bikes, so replace the incorrect noun and remove redundancy. Suggestion: keep subject consistent with the question and avoid repeating the location (e.g., 'Yes, bikes are popular in our country.').