Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Expand your answer with a brief topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Mention what kind of bike it was, how you used it, or a short memory to make your response more natural and engaging. Keep it under five sentences and use linking words like "and" or "so" to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I did. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I rode it around my neighborhood every afternoon. I learned to balance on it when I was six, so it became my favorite way to play outdoors.

提案: Give a clear direct response first (yes or no), then support it with specific reasons and examples. Avoid fragmented sentences and unclear phrasing. Use linking words such as "however", "because", or "for example" to make the answer coherent. Aim for 2–4 polished sentences.

例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people prefer cars and public transport because cities are busy and road safety is a concern. However, cycling is becoming more common in some areas as people try to exercise and avoid traffic.

× Well, maybe I can tell you that in our country by.

✓ Well, maybe I can tell you that about our country.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and an unnecessary preposition 'by'. This is a sentence structure and preposition misuse issue. Use 'about' to indicate the topic (our country) and place it after 'tell you' forming 'tell you about our country'. Also 'maybe' and 'well' are fine but keep natural flow: 'Well, maybe I can tell you about our country.'

× Are not so popular as you think.

✓ Bicycles are not as popular as you might think.

The original sentence lacks a subject and auxiliary verb, creating a sentence without a proper verb phrase. This is a sentence structure error and subject-verb omission. Add a subject ('Bicycles' or 'They') and the auxiliary 'are' and use the comparative structure 'not as ... as'. 'You might think' is a natural modal suggestion. The corrected sentence: 'Bicycles are not as popular as you might think.'