Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Use correct tense and give a brief supporting detail. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one or two specific details (where you rode it, who you rode with, or a short memory). Keep it concise and natural.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it every afternoon around my neighborhood with my friends, and I especially remember learning to ride without training wheels in my grandparents’ driveway.

提案: Answer directly about your country, use correct grammar, choose appropriate vocabulary (e.g., 'fun' instead of 'funny') and give a specific reason or example. Use a linking word to connect idea and supporting detail.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are an affordable and healthy way to travel. For example, many people use bicycles for short commutes in cities, and there are growing numbers of bike lanes to encourage cycling.

× Yeah, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student used the present tense 'have' with a past time reference 'when I was a child'. Use simple past 'had' to match the past time. Also 'Yeah' is informal; 'Yes' is more appropriate in a test. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× I think bikes are popular in many countries because it's funny and more healthy than cars.

✓ I think bikes are popular in many countries because they are fun and healthier than cars.

The sentence uses the singular pronoun 'it' to refer to 'bikes' (plural) and uses adjective 'funny' incorrectly—'fun' is the correct adjective for enjoyment. Also 'more healthy' should be the comparative adjective 'healthier'. Correct pronoun and adjective forms: use 'they' for plural 'bikes', 'fun' instead of 'funny', and 'healthier' for comparison. Grammar problem type ID: 12