Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be direct and use correct tense and slightly expand your answer with one or two brief supporting details. Use past simple for childhood and avoid single-word replies. For example, start with a clear topic sentence (Yes, I did.), then add a short detail (what kind of bike or a memory).

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I learnt to ride it in my neighbourhood when I was seven.

提案: Give a clear opinion using correct grammar, link ideas logically, and provide specific reasons or examples. Use linking words (because, however, for example). Avoid unclear vocabulary like 'portion' or 'school for company'. Keep to 2–4 sentences max.

例: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country because most people prefer cars or motorbikes for convenience. For example, long distances and poor cycling infrastructure make cars and scooters a more practical choice for daily travel.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. 'Have' is present tense and inappropriate here; the correct short answer for a past possession question is 'Yes, I did.' Use past tense verbs to match time references. Suggestion: Use past-tense short answers (did, was, had) when the question refers to the past.

× No, I don't think bikes already portion in my country because many people prefer car or motorbike school for company.

✓ No, I don't think bikes are already popular in my country because many people prefer cars or motorbikes for commuting.

Multiple issues: 'already portion' is incorrect word choice and structure; likely intended 'are already popular'. The sentence also has problems with count nouns and choice of nouns: 'car' and 'motorbike' should be plural when speaking generally, and 'school for company' is incorrect—likely meant 'commuting' or 'for commuting to work/school' or 'as a means of transport'. Finally, the verb phrase should use present simple ('don't think bikes are...') to discuss a general present situation. Suggestion: Use 'are popular' for present general statements, use correct adjectives ('popular'), use plural nouns for general categories ('cars, motorbikes'), and use appropriate phrases like 'for commuting' or 'for getting to work/school'.