Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and unrelated to the question. For Part 1 you should respond directly with a simple topic sentence (yes/no) and 1–2 supporting details. Use natural vocabulary and coherent linking. For example, state whether you had a bike, how often you used it, and one specific memory or reason why it was important. Keep to a maximum of about 3–4 short sentences.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it to school and to the park almost every day. Because my parents lived nearby, cycling was a convenient and fun way to get around.

提案: Your response is a fragment and more like a question back to the examiner. Instead, give a clear opinion first, then support it with a reason and a brief example. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'for example' to connect ideas and be specific about where they are popular (e.g., cities) and why (convenience, cost, traffic).

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in cities. This is because they are cheap and convenient for short trips, and many places have good bike lanes. For example, in my city many students and office workers cycle to avoid traffic during rush hour.

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✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The student's reply does not answer the examiner's past-tense question and contains unclear structure and incorrect verb usage. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Suggestion: Use a clear past-tense declarative sentence that directly addresses the question. Example: 'I had a bike when I was a child.' Use simple past for past possession and place subject before verb.

× Is it especially in Osaka? Lot of people use bike?

✓ Are bikes especially popular in Osaka? Do a lot of people use bikes?

The student used incorrect question forms and omitted necessary auxiliary verbs and articles, causing sentence structure errors (ID 26). Also 'bike' should be plural in the second question. Suggestions: Use correct question word order and include auxiliary verbs ('are', 'do'). Use plural 'bikes' when asking about many people. Combine into two well-formed questions: 'Are bikes especially popular in Osaka?' and 'Do a lot of people use bikes?'.