Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve grammar, tense consistency and natural phrasing. Use past tense for childhood, start with a topic sentence, then add one brief supporting detail with a linking word. Keep it under five sentences. For example, say you didn’t have a bike and give a specific reason or contrast.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school because my family couldn’t afford one. As a result, I became used to walking long distances.

提案: Make the answer more natural and add a specific reason or example using a linking word. Start with a clear topic sentence then give one specific supporting detail. Vary vocabulary (e.g., ‘common’, ‘widely used’).

例: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country, especially in rural areas. For instance, many people use them to commute short distances because they are inexpensive and easy to maintain.

× No, I don't have any bike when I was child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't have' with past time reference 'when I was child'. Use past simple 'didn't have' to match the past time. Also 'any bike' is ungrammatical for a countable noun in affirmative/negative context here; use 'a bike'. Finally, 'when I was child' is missing the article 'a'. Suggestion: use past simple for past events, use 'a' with singular countable nouns ('a bike'), and include 'a' before 'child' in this phrase ('when I was a child').

× Yes, the bikes are very popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.

Using the definite article 'the' before 'bikes' implies a specific set of bikes; in general statements about all bikes the article is not needed. The correct general plural form is 'bikes are very popular'. Suggestion: omit 'the' when making generalizations about a whole class (use plural noun without article).