Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve grammar and tense consistency, make the response natural and concise, and add one brief supporting detail. Use past tense for past situations, avoid filler words, and keep it under five sentences. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then give a short reason or memory using a linking word.

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. However, I often borrowed my neighbor's bike to ride around the park, which I enjoyed because it gave me a sense of freedom.

× No, I don't have bike when, uh, I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present simple ('don't have') with a past time reference ('when I was a child'). Use the past tense 'didn't have' for an action/state in the past. Also include the article 'a' before 'bike'. Remove the filler comma before 'uh' and place 'uh' as a spoken hesitation if needed (not required in a corrected written sentence). Suggested improvement: use consistent past tense and correct articles: 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.'