Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 用更自然和时态一致的句子来回答，避免重复和语法错误。先直接回答问题，然后补充具体细节（什么时候、谁、频率、感受）。使用连接词使话语连贯，并把句子控制在五句以内。举例改进点：把“have”改为过去式“had”，把“father's always come accompany me”改为“my father always accompanied me”或“My father used to accompany me”。

例: Yes, I did. I had a red bike when I was a child and I often rode it to school. My father used to accompany me on the way, which made me feel safe. I usually rode it three or four times a week during primary school.

提案: 回答要更明确并注意单词拼写和表达的准确性。先给出明确立场（Yes/No/Partly），然后用一到两句具体原因支持观点，使用连接词如“because”或“however”。修正错误：把“write write their mobile cards”改为“use mobile phones”或“take public transport”；把“drive car”改为“drive cars”。

例: Not really. I think fewer people ride bikes in my country because many prefer to use mobile phones and take public transport or drive cars. However, cycling is becoming more common in some cities where there are bike lanes.

× Yes, I have a red bike.

✓ Yes, I had a red bike.

原句使用現在時（have）與面試官問過去的時間（"when you were a child"）不一致。應使用過去時態 "had"。建議：遇到談論過去的時間標誌（如 when you were a child, last year, when I was young）時，將動詞改為過去式。

× I often ride my bike to school and my father's always come accompany me.

✓ I often rode my bike to school and my father always came to accompany me.

原句中時態混用——"often" 與過去背景應使用過去式（rode, came）；另外 "come accompany" 構詞不正確，應改為 "came to accompany" 或 "would accompany"。建議：描述過去習慣用過去式（例如 often + 過去式），並使用正確的固定搭配如 "come to do" 或直接用 "accompany" 前有動詞（came to accompany）。

× Right To ride, yes.

✓ Right — I used to ride it, yes.

原句語序與詞彙使用混亂（"Right To ride" 無意義）。應改為完整的句子來表示同意與過去的習慣：可用 "I used to ride it" 或 "Yes, I used to ride it"。建議：避免片段式回應，說清主語與動詞並保持時態一致。

× I don't think so because many people also write write their mobile cards or drive car.

✓ I don't think so because many people also use mobile phones or drive cars.

原句中有多個錯誤：重複單詞 "write write"；"write their mobile cards" 不合語義，應為 "use mobile phones"；單數 "drive car" 應為複數或加冠詞 "drive cars" 或 "drive a car"。此外時態（現在）與問句一致。建議：檢查單詞是否重複，使用正確動詞搭配（use mobile phones），並注意名詞單複數或冠詞使用。