Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Use past tense and a clearer, natural structure. Start with a direct topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add brief supporting detail. Avoid future tense when talking about the past. Add a linking phrase if you give extra information.

例: No, I didn’t have my own bike when I was a child. Instead, I often borrowed bikes from neighbors or used a shared bike on the street when I wanted to ride. Because I didn’t own one, I usually rode only on weekends or special occasions.

提案: Use consistent tense and more precise vocabulary; state your opinion and then give specific supporting details with linking words. Correct grammatical errors (e.g., 'some schools', 'let us borrow bikes', 'go on trips'). Keep it within 3–4 sentences for clarity.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in Taiwan. For example, many schools lend students bikes for short outings, and there are widespread bike-sharing services in cities. As a result, cycling is a common and convenient way to travel for both short commutes and leisure rides.

× I don't have a bike, but I will borrow the bike on the road.

✓ I didn't have a bike, but I used to borrow bikes on the road.

The examiner asked about the past (when you were a child), so present tense 'don't have' and future 'will borrow' are incorrect. Use past tense 'didn't have' for state in the past and a past habit expression 'used to borrow' or 'would borrow'. Also 'the bike' is too specific; use plural or no article for habitual action ('bikes' or 'a bike'). Suggestion: say 'I didn't have a bike, but I used to borrow bikes on the road.'

× Bikes are super popular in Taiwan. Some school will let us borrow bike on the road and go ride on trip.

✓ Bikes are very popular in Taiwan. Some schools let us borrow bikes and go on trips.

Multiple errors: 'super' is informal — 'very' is more appropriate in a test. 'Some school' is singular but refers to some of many schools, so use plural 'some schools' (singular/plural issue). 'Will let' expresses future; the context asks generally, so use present simple 'let' (present tense issue). 'Borrow bike' needs plural or an article: use 'borrow bikes' (singular/plural or article error). 'Go ride on trip' is ungrammatical: use 'go on trips' or 'go riding on trips' (sentence structure and verb usage). Suggestion: 'Bikes are very popular in Taiwan. Some schools let us borrow bikes and go on trips.'