Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap çok kısa ve doğal değil; tam cümle kullanmalı, gerekirse neden veya bir kısa detay eklemelisin. Ayrıca bağlantı kelimeleri yok. En fazla 5 cümleyle başlayıp ardından bir veya iki destekleyici bilgi ver. Örneğin neden sahibi olmadığını, ne hissettiğini veya bir anıyı belirtebilirsin.

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn't afford one at the time, so I usually walked to school instead. I remember watching my friends ride around the neighborhood and feeling a bit left out. Later, when I was older, I bought a secondhand bike and enjoyed riding on weekends.

提案: Cevapta fikir belirtilmiş ama ifadeler doğrudan ve bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve mantık bozuklukları var. ‘Strong roles’ ifadesi belirsiz; daha açık sebep sunmalı, uygun bağlaçlar kullanmalı ve daha spesifik örneklerle desteklemelisin. En fazla 4 cümleyle görüşünü söyle, sonra iki kısa destekleyici neden ver.

例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. One reason is that many people prefer cars for comfort and status, and urban planning favors cars over bicycles. For example, most streets lack bike lanes and public messaging often promotes car ownership. So although some people cycle occasionally, it's still quite rare.

× I didn't have.

✓ I didn't have one.

The original sentence lacks an object; after 'have' a noun or pronoun is required to complete the idea. In this context the examiner asked about having a bike, so include a noun (one) or repeat 'a bike'. Suggestion: say 'I didn't have one' or 'I didn't have a bike.'

× I don't think that bikes are popular in my country because they have a strong roles.

✓ I don't think that bikes are popular in my country because they have a weak role.

The phrase 'have a strong roles' has number and word choice problems. 'Roles' is plural while 'a' is singular; also 'strong role' or 'little role' better expresses influence. Here the intended meaning seems that bikes do not play an important part, so 'have a weak role' or 'play a small role' is correct. Use consistent singular/plural and appropriate collocation: 'have a weak role' or 'play a minor role.'

× Like there must be only white cars in the city so there is not actually any bike there.

✓ For example, there are only white cars in the city, so there aren't actually any bikes there.

Starting with 'Like' is informal and not fitting; use 'For example.' Also 'there must be only white cars' implies necessity incorrectly; simple present 'there are only white cars' states fact. 'There is not actually any bike' mixes singular/plural and is awkward; use 'there aren't actually any bikes.' Fix subject-verb agreement and use correct negation. Use commas to connect clauses properly.

× There is, but it's really rare.

✓ There are, but they are really rare.

Refers to 'bikes' (plural), so use plural verb 'are' and plural pronoun 'they.' 'There is' is singular and mismatches the plural noun. Use 'There are' and 'they are' to agree in number.