Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is difficult to understand because of many grammar errors, wrong words and hesitations. To improve: 1) Use correct verb tenses and subject-verb agreement (e.g., "I had a bike"). 2) Replace incorrect words with accurate vocabulary ("bike" not "pie"), and avoid filler sounds ("uh"). 3) Give a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., "because", "so"). 4) Keep responses concise (1–3 sentences). Practice short rehearsed answers and record yourself to reduce hesitations.

例: I had a bike when I was a child. My parents taught me to ride when I was six, and I used it every day to go to the park and visit friends, so it became a big part of my childhood.

提案: Your response shows an attempt to answer but has unclear vocabulary, grammar mistakes and many hesitations. To improve: 1) Choose the correct words (e.g., "bikes" not "boys"). 2) Use correct noun-verb agreement ("motorbikes are"). 3) Make a clear opinion statement followed by reasons with linking words (e.g., "because", "however"). 4) Provide one specific example or comparison (e.g., use for commuting, cost reasons). Practice forming short opinions with a reason to reduce pauses.

例: Yes, I think bikes are still popular, especially in cities. Many people use motorbikes because they are cheap and convenient for commuting in heavy traffic, but bicycles are also common for short trips and exercise.

× Yes, definitely, I have a pie when I were a try.

✓ Yes, definitely, I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense 'have' with past context and uses incorrect words; 'pie' and 'try' are wrong choices. Use simple past 'had' for a past situation and 'was a child' rather than 'were a try'. Suggestion: use 'I had a bike when I was a child.'

× Because uh, my parent, uh, UH1UH-1 me uh, ride, ride bicycle.

✓ Because my parents taught me to ride a bicycle.

Plural noun 'parents' is needed (parent -> parents). The verb phrase is incorrect: use 'taught me to ride' or 'showed me how to ride'. Also include the article 'a' before 'bicycle'. Suggestion: 'Because my parents taught me to ride a bicycle.'

× So all day bar boat, a bike for me.

✓ So I rode my bike all day.

The original is ungrammatical and contains wrong words ('bar boat'). Use a clear subject and past tense verb: 'I rode my bike all day.' This fits the past-time context. Suggestion: keep subject first, then verb, then time expression.

× Yeah, uh, I think uh, I think the boys uh, is more or less popular in my country uh, right now, uh, because uh, the motorbikes is very convenient and uh is uh uh transportation to uh.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are more or less popular in my country right now, because motorbikes are very convenient and are a common means of transportation.

Multiple errors: subject-verb agreement for plural 'bikes' and 'motorbikes' requires 'are' not 'is'. 'The boys' is incorrect word choice; use 'bikes'. Also use 'a common means of transportation' instead of awkward fragment 'is uh uh transportation to uh'. Suggestion: ensure plural subjects take plural verbs and use clear noun phrases like 'a common means of transportation.'