Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer gives relevant information but has many grammar and clarity problems. In English (Cambodia): Improve grammar (subject-verb agreement, correct tense and articles), reduce repetition, and make one clear topic sentence followed by a short supporting detail. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas and keep it to 2–3 sentences.

例: I am a third-year accounting student, so I don't have a job right now. In the future I hope to find a good job in accounting because I want to build a long-term career.

提案: Your answer is positive but has grammar errors and repetition. In English (Cambodia): Start with a clear topic sentence naming the university, then give one or two specific reasons why it's good. Use linking words like "because" and correct singular/plural forms.

例: I study at Wanda University in Samrae. It is the best place to study accounting in the city because the campus is beautiful and the accounting department has experienced lecturers.

提案: Answer is short and unclear with grammar mistakes and vague phrases. In English (Cambodia): Give a direct yes/no topic sentence, then one clear supporting reason with a specific example. Use correct forms ("teachers", "resources"). Avoid vague words like "a few" without context.

例: Yes, it is a good place to study because we have many qualified teachers who explain accounting clearly. For example, my lecturer uses real company examples to help us understand.

提案: Your answer repeats praise but does not answer the question about changes. In English (Cambodia): Directly state whether you want changes, then mention specific improvements (facilities, resources, schedules). Use linking words like "but" or "however" to contrast praise and suggestions.

例: Yes, although I like my school, I would like better library hours and more computers for students. These changes would make studying more convenient, especially during exam periods.

提案: Good content and clear idea but grammar and phrasing need correction. In English (Cambodia): Start with a topic sentence about plans, then give specific destinations and reasons. Use correct tense and prepositions ("go abroad for an exchange", "study abroad in the USA").

例: In the future I want to study abroad on an exchange program in the USA, Australia, or Japan because I have always dreamed of experiencing different education systems and improving my English and professional skills.

× I am a student, I am the third years of accounting in this year so I don't have work right now but I think that in the future I I will to finds a good job for my careers.

✓ I am a student. I am in my third year of accounting this year, so I don't have a job right now, but I think that in the future I will find a good job for my career.

The original contains multiple sentence structure and word-form errors: run-on sentences, incorrect ordinal/number phrase ('the third years' should be 'in my third year'), wrong article and noun form ('work' should be 'a job'), duplicated word ('I I'), incorrect infinitive form ('will to finds' should be 'will find'), and plural 'careers' should be singular 'career'. Suggestion: break ideas into shorter sentences, use 'in my third year', use 'a job', remove extra words, and use base verb after 'will'. (English (Cambodia))

× I study at Wanda University in Sam Reef and is the best school in the city so I think my schools is very important and it's so beautiful and it's the best place to study accounting in this city.

✓ I study at Wanda University in Sam Reef, and it is the best school in the city. I think my school is very important; it is beautiful and the best place to study accounting in this city.

Errors include missing subject for 'is' (should be 'it is'), incorrect plural 'schools' instead of 'school', run-on sentences, and awkward repetition. Suggestion: use 'it' as subject for the second clause, keep 'school' singular, separate into sentences, and avoid repeating 'the best' unnecessarily. (English (Cambodia))

× Yes, of course my school has a few and we have a good teachers in here that teach us a lot of knowledge and I hope that our teacher will bring the new.

✓ Yes, of course my school has a few teachers, and we have good teachers here who teach us a lot. I hope that our teachers will bring something new.

'Has a few' needs a noun ('teachers'); 'a good teachers' mixes singular article with plural noun—use 'good teachers' or 'a good teacher'. 'In here' is redundant; use 'here'. 'Teach us a lot of knowledge' is unnatural—use 'teach us a lot'. 'Will bring the new' is unclear; use 'bring something new' or 'introduce new ideas'. Suggestion: correct quantifiers and articles, use plural consistently, and use natural phrases. (English (Cambodia))

× Yes, I love my school very much because it's the best place in the city that we can learn in here. So in this school have a lot of teachers that make you comfortable and.

✓ Yes, I love my school very much because it's the best place in the city for learning. This school has many teachers who make students feel comfortable.

Problems: 'that we can learn in here' is awkward; use 'for learning' or 'where we can learn'. 'So in this school have a lot of teachers' lacks subject—should be 'this school has many teachers'. 'That make you comfortable and.' is incomplete. Suggestion: use 'has' for subject-verb, 'many' instead of 'a lot of' in formal speech, and complete the sentence. (English (Cambodia))

× In the futures I want to go to abroad for exchange my study like USA, Australia or Japan because it's my dream when I was young, I always dream that I want to go there to study my new.

✓ In the future I want to go abroad to study as an exchange student in the USA, Australia, or Japan because it has been my dream since I was young; I always dreamed of going there to study new things.

Errors: 'In the futures' should be 'In the future' (singular). 'Go to abroad' is incorrect—use 'go abroad'. 'For exchange my study' should be 'to study as an exchange student' or 'for an exchange'. Country names need 'the' before USA in some contexts, but 'in the USA' is correct. Tense inconsistency: 'it's my dream when I was young' should be 'it has been my dream since I was young' or 'it was my dream when I was young'. 'Study my new' is unclear—use 'study new things'. Suggestion: fix prepositions, use correct noun phrases for exchange programs, and align tenses. (English (Cambodia))