Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答較清楚但有重複與語序可改進。建議開頭直接回答（work/student），接著用一到兩句補充時間與原因，避免冗言。注意時態一致與連接詞運用（e.g. then, but, now）。可多提供具體細節如準備哪類課程或申請進度。

例: I used to work as a primary school teacher after graduating in 2023, but I have recently resigned and am preparing to study abroad. I am applying for a master's program in Malaysia and currently working on my application materials.

提案: 回答未直接指明“在哪裡學習”（現在或過去），內容重複且偏離問題。建議先直接說明曾就讀的學校名稱或目前學習狀況，再用一兩句補充理由或狀態。使用連接詞（for example, currently）使語意連貫。

例: I studied at X University, where I completed my degree three years ago. At the moment I'm not studying full-time because I have been working, although I'm now preparing to return to study abroad in the near future.

提案: 回答直接且有支持細節，但語句可更自然，細節可更具體（例如圖書館的資源、學習氛圍）。使用連接詞（for example, also）讓描述更流暢。避免不必要的重複如“for the people who want to study”。

例: Yes, I believe it was a good place to study. For example, the university library was large and well-stocked with up-to-date books and quiet study areas, which made it easy to concentrate and do research.

提案: 回答有個人細節但未直接回應“學校”的改變要求。建議先明確指出你通常在哪裡學習，然後說明希望的具體改變或改善（例如更好照明、更多資源或裝潢）。使用更自然的詞彙（an individual study room, put some plants）。

例: I usually study at home in my own study room. I would like to make a few changes, such as adding some plants and better lighting to make the space more comfortable and productive.

提案: 回答明確但語法與時間表述不夠準確（例如“in three years later”應改為“in three years”或“three years from now”）。建議直接說明計劃的學位、預計時間與準備狀態，並用連接詞（because, so）補充原因或進度。

例: I plan to study abroad to pursue further qualifications. Specifically, I hope to start a degree program at a university in Malaysia in about three years, and I am currently preparing my applications and gathering required documents.

× Well, I graduated from the university in 2023. Then I went to work as a teacher in a primary school. Nowadays I quit my job and I'm planning to study abroad.

✓ Well, I graduated from university in 2023. Then I went to work as a teacher in a primary school. Recently I quit my job and I'm planning to study abroad.

句中 “Nowadays I quit my job” 时态与时间词不一致。‘Nowadays’ 表示现在持续的状态，而“quit”是过去式，应该用“recently”或将动词改为现在完成时（I have quit）以表达最近发生的动作。建议使用 “Recently I quit my job” 或 “I have quit my job recently”。

× Well, I've graduated from university three years ago and then I worked as a Chinese teacher in a primary school, so I don't have to study constantly now.

✓ Well, I graduated from university three years ago and then I worked as a Chinese teacher in a primary school, so I don't have to study constantly now.

句首使用了现在完成时（I've graduated）但紧跟具体时间点“three years ago”，这与现在完成时的用法冲突（现在完成时不与明确过去时间连用）。应改为一般过去时 “graduated”。因此将 “I've graduated” 改为 “I graduated”。

× Yes, I think my university is a good place for the people who want to study. Its library is very big and provides some desks for the people to read.

✓ Yes, I think my university is a good place for people who want to study. Its library is very big and provides some desks for people to read.

在英语中，泛指一类人时通常省略不定冠词“the”。原句中两处使用 “the people” 显得不自然，应改为“people”。此外 “for people to read” 更简洁自然。

× Well, I usually study at my house. I have a individual study room and recently I'm considering to buy some plants on my desk to decorate my studying room.

✓ Well, I usually study at my house. I have an individual study room and recently I'm considering buying some plants for my desk to decorate my study room.

“a individual” 中 a/an 使用错误，元音开头单词前应使用“an”。另外 “considering to buy” 用法不正确，动词 consider 后应接动名词（consider buying）。“on my desk” 用法可改为“for my desk” 更自然；“studying room” 不常用，应为“study room”。

× Well, I quit my job last year and I'm planning to study abroad for my further study qualifications. I want to get a degree in the university in Malaysia in three years later.

✓ Well, I quit my job last year and I'm planning to study abroad to pursue further qualifications. I want to get a degree at a university in Malaysia in three years.

“for my further study qualifications” 表达不自然，应改为“to pursue further qualifications”。“in the university in Malaysia in three years later” 同时有冗余和时态问题：不要同时使用“in ... in three years later”；应说 “in three years” 或 “three years later”。此外大学前用不定冠词“a university” 更自然；介词用 “at a university”。