Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更完整、语法准确并自然表达。注意时态和冠词，专业要用复数或正确形式。可以用一句主题句说明身份，然后加一两句简短细节，比如年级或专业课程。避免语法错误如“major in economic”。

例: I'm currently an undergraduate student majoring in Economics. I'm in my third year and I focus mainly on microeconomics and international trade.

提案: 地点表述要更地道，注意介词和冠词使用，避免字面翻译。可先直接回答学校名称，再补充位置信息并用连词连接使句子更流畅。

例: I study at Wuhan Business University, which is located in central China. It's about an hour from Wuhan city center by bus.

提案: 回答清晰但略显冗长。可以用更自然的连接词并提供具体原因或例子来支持观点，如学习环境、设施或图书馆。控制在最多五句内。

例: Yes, I think it's a great place to study because it's away from the busy city center, which makes it very quiet. The campus also has several study rooms and a well-stocked library.

提案: 回答重复并不够具体。即使不想改变，也可以简单解释原因并提出一两个小建议或进一步说明为何满意。使用连接词让表达更连贯。

例: No, I wouldn't change it because I find the campus peaceful and well-equipped for studying. If I had to suggest one improvement, I would ask for extended library hours during exam periods.

提案: 回答明确但语法和用词需改进（例如“be an international student in France”可更自然，“get a master degree”应为“get a master's degree”）。可加上原因或目标专业以丰富内容。

例: I plan to finish my undergraduate degree and then pursue a master's degree in France. I hope to study International Economics in Paris to broaden my perspective and improve my language skills.

× I'm currently a university student, major in economic.

✓ I'm currently a university student, majoring in economics.

错误类型：动词 + -ing 形式 / 名词形式错误。原句中“major in economic”结构不正确。表示专业时可用“major in + 专业名词”或用现在分词“majoring in + 专业名词”。另外，“economic”是形容词，正确的名词形式是“economics”。建议使用“majoring in economics”或“major in economics”。（用法提示：当谈论当前主修时，常用“majoring in + 学科名词”。）

× I study in Wuhan Business University in the middle of the China.

✓ I study at Wuhan Business University in central China.

错误类型：介词使用和冠词错误。1) 在表示“在某所大学学习”时，英语常用介词“at”而不是“in”。2) “the China”不正确，国家名前通常不加定冠词“the”。3) “in the middle of the China”可用“in central China”或“in the middle of China”。建议改为“In central China”更自然。

× Yes, it is because the school is quite far from the city center and it's a quiet place for students to study.

✓ Yes, it is. The school is quite far from the city center, so it's a quiet place for students to study.

错误类型：句子结构问题。原句把两个独立陈述连成一长句，逻辑衔接更自然用两个句子或用连词“so”。建议分句或用恰当连词以使句子更清晰。

× No, I don't like to change my study place because the place I study now is pretty good for me. I think it's pretty quiet.

✓ No, I don't want to change where I study because my current school is pretty good for me. I think it's quite quiet.

错误类型：动词使用与表达偏好。1) 英语中谈论不想改变某事，常用“don't want to”而不是“don't like to change”。2) “the place I study now”可用更自然的“where I study”或“my current school”。3) 建议将“pretty quiet”或“quite quiet”二选一保持一致。

× I plan to finish my undergraduate studies, then I want to be an international student in France and get a master degree.

✓ I plan to finish my undergraduate studies, then I want to study in France as an international student and get a master's degree.

错误类型：时态与词语搭配。1) “be an international student in France”语法上可以，但更自然为“study in France as an international student”。2) “master degree”不正确，应为“master's degree”。3) 时态上保持将来计划可用“plan to... then... want to...”或更简洁“plan to... and then study...”。建议使用“get a master's degree”。