Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 语法错误较多且表达不自然。应直接回答并用正确时态和结构，比如用“I work at...”或“I’m working at...”，同时可以补充职位或主要职责作为支持细节。句子不要太长，保证清晰。

例: I work at a building contract company. I manage project schedules and coordinate with subcontractors to ensure work stays on time.

提案: 结构基本正确，但介词和学校名称的表达可以更自然。可以说“I study at South University in China.”并补充专业或年级作为支持细节，使答案更具体。

例: I study at South University in China. I'm currently studying civil engineering in my third year.

提案: 回答不够自然且含糊。应直接表达观点（yes/no 或 it's...）并给出具体理由。使用连贯词连接原因，如“because”或“although”。语气要更自然，例如“It’s fairly average, because...”

例: It's fairly average compared with other universities, because the facilities are okay but the libraries could be improved.

提案: 回答混乱且含有不明词汇（“Wild bills”不清楚）。首先用完整句子表明意愿，然后给出清楚的原因或提出具体改进意见。避免使用不明短语，若要表达喜欢某些方面，应明确说明是什么（例如 campus atmosphere or facilities）。

例: Not really, because I like the campus atmosphere and my professors. However, I think the cafeteria could offer more healthy options.

提案: 回答简短且缺乏完整句法。应以完整句回答并提供具体计划（例如想学的技能、课程或目标），并使用连接词扩展细节。

例: I plan to train my technical skills and take advanced courses in structural design so I can qualify for professional certification.

× I'm work at a building contract company.

✓ I work at a building contracting company.

句子使用了错误的动词结构。原句中“I’m work”把be动词和动词work一起使用，形成了不正确的进行时结构。应使用一般现在时“I work”表示职业。同时“building contract company”用法不自然，改为“building contracting company”或“construction company”更常见。建议用一般现在时描述职业：主语 + 动词原形（第三人称外）+ 其他成分。

× I study in South University in China.

✓ I study at South University in China.

介词使用错误。英语中表示在某所大学学习通常用介词“at”而不是“in”。此外，学校名称前可省略冠词，如果学校官方名为“South University”则直接使用“at South University”。建议记住常用搭配：study at a/the university。

× Super normal in my country.

✓ It's quite normal in my country.

句子缺少主语和谓语，属于句子结构不完整。原句只有形容词短语，需加主语和系动词构成完整句子，例如“It is quite/pretty normal”。建议每个句子包含主语和谓语，表达更完整。

× No, I don't really, because I like. Wild bills in my university.

✓ No, I don't really, because I like it. There are wild bills in my university.

原句存在代词缺失与句子断裂问题。首先“because I like.”后面需要宾语，通常是“it”。其次“Wild bills in my university.”缺少谓语，应为“There are wild bills in my university”或更自然的表述（若“wild bills”意指某种事物，应改为正确词）。总体需补全主语或系动词并确保代词有对应的宾语。建议注意从句完整性和代词用法。

× Training my skills and learning more.

✓ I will train my skills and learn more.

原句是非谓语短语，缺少明确时态和主语，作为回答未来计划应使用将来时或一般现在时的计划表达，如“I will…”或“I plan to…”。因此改为“I will train my skills and learn more.”以匹配“future study plans”问题。建议回答时使用完整句子并根据上下文选择正确时态（此处为将来计划）。