Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更简洁、语法正确并直接点出关键信息。注意地点和专业名称的发音与表达，避免重复。可以把信息分成一句主题句和一句补充句，使用连词（and/or）连接要点。

例: I'm currently a student. I study at Sichuan Tourism University in Chengdu, and my major is Building Electrical Engineering; I also study Italian as a second subject.

提案: 注意介词和定语从句的正确用法，避免多余词语。把地名和机构名称顺序调整为更地道的表达，并可用简短补充说明校园特点。

例: I study at Sichuan Tourism University, which is located in Chengdu. The campus is quite large and has a friendly atmosphere.

提案: 回答应更自然、语法正确并使用更恰当的形容词。把观点放在第一句，用第二句给出具体理由并用连接词衔接（for example / because）。避免把形容词用错词性（kindly → kind）。

例: Yes, it's a great place to study because the campus environment is peaceful and the air is clean, and the people are very kind and helpful.

提案: 回答要使用正确人称和时态，避免重复否定词。先直接回答（No），然后用一两句说明原因并用连接词（because / since）。把“I am a people”改为“I am a person”或“I prefer”。

例: No, I wouldn't like any changes because I prefer a sustainable environment and I'm very happy with the facilities and atmosphere where I live now.

提案: 回答要明确、完整，避免含糊和口头填充词（uh-huh, etc.）。先给主题句（I plan to...），再具体说明如何实现（e.g. internships, postgraduate study）并用连词解释目的。

例: I plan to do an internship at a company related to my major in building electrical engineering so that I can gain practical experience and apply what I've learned.

× I'm currently a student and I study in Chengdu Sutram province and my major is building electrical and engineering and and Italian.

✓ I'm currently a student and I study in Chengdu, Sichuan Province. My major is building electrical engineering and Italian.

错误类型：现在时/表达不自然。解释：句子中有重复的连词“and and”，地名拼写错误（Sutram→Sichuan），并且专业表达应分成两句以更清晰地使用现在时。建议：删除重复词，修正地名并把专业分为独立句子，使现在时表达清晰准确。

× I study in Sichuan Tourism University which has located in Chengdu province.

✓ I study at Sichuan Tourism University, which is located in Chengdu Province.

错误类型：现在时表达和介词使用（which has located）不正确。解释：应使用被动现在时或简单现在时的被动结构“is located”，并且搭配介词为“at”用于表示在某个学校学习。建议：将“in”改为“at”，把“has located”改为“is located”。

× Of course, yes, the environment of our school is very good, the air is fresh and the people there also is very kindly.

✓ Of course. The environment of our school is very good; the air is fresh and the people there are very kind.

错误类型：形容词/副词使用与主谓一致。解释：原句中“people”是复数，谓语应为“are”；“kindly”是副词，用来修饰动词，应使用形容词“kind”来描述人。建议：把“is”改为“are”，把“kindly”改为“kind”，并调整标点使句子更自然。

× No, I won't. Wouldn't. I am a people who like living a sustainable environment. I think where I live now, it's very good, so I didn't want to make a change.

✓ No, I wouldn't. I am a person who likes living in a sustainable environment. I think where I live now is very good, so I don't want to make a change.

错误类型：主谓一致、时态和名词形式。解释：'people'是复数，应该用单数'person'；主语单数时动词需加-s（'likes'）。“living a sustainable environment”搭配不当，应为“living in a sustainable environment”。另外前后时态不一致，表达愿望用现在时“don't want”更合适。建议：使用单数名词、调整动词形式和介词，并统一现在时态以表达现在的意愿。

× I plan to study in a company which the the drop is connected with my major so that I could. Play. Uh-huh.

✓ I plan to work in a company whose work is connected with my major so that I can gain experience.

错误类型：句子结构错误和词汇搭配错误。解释：原句中“study in a company”搭配不当，通常在公司是“work”或“intern”；“which the the drop is connected with my major”结构混乱且重复“the”，应使用“whose work is connected with my major”或“that is related to my major”。句末断裂的片段“so that I could. Play.”不完整且不合语境。建议：把“study in a company”改为“work in a company”或“intern at a company”，使用“whose/that is related to my major”，并把目的表达为“so that I can gain experience”。