Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Use correct grammar and a clear topic sentence. Say you are a student simply and correct verb forms. Keep it concise and natural.

例: I am a student and I am not working at the moment because I am focusing on my studies.

提案: Give a clear, direct answer stating the institution and brief background. Use simple past for completed actions and present for current status. Avoid repetition and keep it within two to three sentences.

例: I study at the local government college in my city. I finished my senior secondary school last year and started college this academic year.

提案: Organize your reply: start with a direct opinion, then give two specific reasons using linking words (for example, because, and). Use plural/singular forms correctly and natural word order.

例: Yes, it is a good place to study because the teachers are well qualified and there are good facilities like a library and laboratories. In addition, the college is government-approved, which gives me confidence in the quality of education.

提案: Answer directly and clearly. If you think no changes are needed, explain briefly why with specific reasons. Avoid unclear phrases and ensure grammar is correct. Keep to one or two sentences.

例: I don't think any major changes are necessary because the teaching and facilities meet my needs. However, I would welcome more study materials in the library to help with research.

提案: State your plan clearly with correct tense and vocabulary. Use a topic sentence, then add a brief reason or detail. Replace unclear phrases like 'meeting my graduation' and 'future parent' with correct expressions.

例: After I graduate, I plan to study abroad for a master's degree because I want to gain international experience and improve my career prospects.

× I not doing any kind of work because I continue my study. I'm a student.

✓ I am not doing any kind of work because I am continuing my studies. I am a student.

Errors: missing auxiliary 'am' for present continuous and incorrect noun form 'study' instead of plural 'studies'. Use present continuous with 'am not doing' and 'am continuing'. Use 'studies' to mean ongoing education. Suggestion: include correct auxiliary verbs and use plural 'studies' when referring to ongoing education.

× I have a study in the college I have I have done my senior secondary in last year and I now when I went to college.

✓ I study at a college. I completed my senior secondary last year and now I am attending college.

Errors: awkward structure and incorrect tense usage. 'I have a study in the college' is unnatural; use 'I study at a college'. 'I have done my senior secondary in last year' mixes present perfect with a specific past time; change to simple past 'I completed my senior secondary last year'. 'I now when I went to college' is unclear; intended meaning is present continuous 'now I am attending college'. Suggestion: use simple past for completed actions with time expressions and present continuous for ongoing actions.

× Nearest my local college is good for study because many well educated teacher and good facility available in the college.

✓ My nearest local college is good for studying because many well-educated teachers and good facilities are available in the college.

Errors: wrong word order 'Nearest my local college' should be 'My nearest local college'. 'good for study' -> 'good for studying'. 'well educated teacher' needs plural 'teachers' and hyphenated adjective 'well-educated'. 'good facility available' needs plural 'facilities' and verb 'are'. Suggestion: correct word order, use gerund after 'good for', make nouns and verbs agree in number, and hyphenate compound adjectives where appropriate.

× The college is government approved.

✓ The college is government-approved.

Minor punctuation/word-formation issue: compound adjective describing the college should be hyphenated 'government-approved'. Suggestion: hyphenate compound adjectives before a noun or when used as a predicate adjective to improve clarity.

× According to me there is no need for change in my study because all working very well.

✓ In my opinion, there is no need for changes in my studies because everything is working very well.

Errors: 'According to me' is unnatural; use 'In my opinion'. 'no need for change in my study' should be 'no need for changes in my studies'. 'all working very well' lacks subject and verb; use 'everything is working very well' or 'everything works well'. Suggestion: use natural opinion phrases and ensure subject-verb completeness and correct plural forms.

× I have completed my study soon and grey and done with good marks.

✓ I will complete my studies soon and graduate with good marks.

Errors: tense mismatch and wrong word 'grey' instead of 'graduate'. 'I have completed my study soon' mixes present perfect with future meaning; use future 'I will complete my studies soon'. 'done with good marks' should be 'graduate with good marks'. Suggestion: use future tense for actions that will happen soon and correct spelling of 'graduate'.

× After meeting my graduation, I will go to abroad for my higher education that is my future parent related to my study.

✓ After completing my graduation, I will go abroad for my higher education; that is my future plan related to my studies.

Errors: 'After meeting my graduation' is incorrect collocation; use 'After completing my graduation' or 'After I graduate'. 'go to abroad' should be 'go abroad'. 'my future parent related to my study' is meaningless; likely 'my future plan related to my studies'. Suggestion: use correct collocations ('graduate', 'go abroad') and clear phrasing like 'future plan'.