Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 对象句要更直接并使用更自然的表达，同时避免多余信息并可略微拓展。建议将句子分为主题句和一到两句补充。注意地名拼写与专业名词自然搭配。

例: I'm a university student in Tai'an, majoring in International Economics and Trade. I study at Taishan University, where I focus on courses like microeconomics and international business.

提案: 句子结构不太自然，语法与词序需要调整。避免使用不必要的开头词（例如"Actually"），并使用简洁的主句加上具体细节作为支持。

例: I study at Taishan University in Tai'an. It's a medium-sized campus with modern classrooms and quiet study areas where I usually spend most of my time.

提案: 回答过长且有些冗余。用更自然的连接词并具体说明为什么方便（例如资源类型、开放时间或电子资源），控制在最多五句内。

例: Yes, it's a great place to study because the university has a large library with extensive collections of politics and scientific research materials. In addition, the library offers long opening hours and online databases, which makes finding sources very convenient.

提案: 回答不够自然且含混（例如“No, I think so”自相矛盾）。应直接回答并给出具体理由或一处小改进。避免语法错误如“has already have”。

例: Not really, I’m quite happy with it because we have a large library and a small café for study breaks. If I had to suggest one improvement, it would be more quiet study rooms for group projects.

提案: 回答表达有些笨拙且含糊。建议直接说明计划（例如申请硕士或交换学习），并给出理由和时间安排，控制在五句内。

例: I plan to continue studying Korean and apply for a postgraduate program related to Korean studies next year. I’ve been learning the language for a year and I hope to improve my proficiency and possibly study abroad in Korea for a semester.

× I'm a university student in Tai An and my major is International Economy and Trade.

✓ I'm a university student in Taian and my major is International Economics and Trade.

句中存在专业名称和地名拼写与冠词/词形问题。应使用复数形式“Economics”而不是“Economy”，且地名通常写作“Taian”。建议：注意固定搭配的专业名称，查证标准英文拼写。

× Actually my University School named Taishan University in Tai An and I always spend time studying here.

✓ Actually, my university is Taishan University in Taian, and I always spend time studying here.

原句结构混乱，‘University School named ...’ 不自然。应使用主系表结构 ‘my university is ...’ 并在地名拼写保持一致。建议：用简单主系表句明确主语和表语，注意标点分隔短句。

× Yes, definitely, as our school has a huge library which contains different kinds of books such as political books and scientific research books, so it is really convenient for me to search.

✓ Yes, definitely. Our school has a huge library that contains many kinds of books, such as political books and scientific research books, so it is really convenient for me to search for information.

原句冗长且连词使用不当，‘which contains different kinds of books’ 更自然为 ‘that contains many kinds of books’，同时动词短语应为 ‘search for information’ 而非单独 'search'。建议：简化句子，使用合适的关系代词和固定搭配（search for）。

× No, I think so because our school has already have a huge library and a small cafe for students to have during their reading time, so I think there's nothing to add effect.

✓ No, I don't think so because our school already has a huge library and a small cafe for students to use during their study time, so I don't think there's anything to add.

原句中多处问题：‘I think so’ 与否定回答矛盾，应为 ‘I don't think so’；‘has already have’ 动词重复，应为 ‘already has’；‘for students to have during their reading time’ 不自然，应为 ‘for students to use during their study time’；结尾 ‘nothing to add effect’ 不合规范，应为 ‘nothing to add’。建议：注意否定表达、一致的动词形式和常用搭配。

× Actually, I have studied Korean for about one year, so I prefer to apply for a further education in Korean in the next year and that's all.

✓ Actually, I have been studying Korean for about one year, so I plan to apply for further study in Korean next year.

使用现在完成进行时更能表达持续动作：应为 ‘have been studying’ 而不是简单完成；‘prefer to apply for a further education in Korean in the next year’ 不自然，改为 ‘plan to apply for further study in Korean next year’ 更符合英语表达。建议：区分现在完成与现在完成进行时，使用自然的短语 ‘apply for further study’ 或 ‘apply for postgraduate study’。