Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 句子時態和冠詞要注意，表達應更自然、流暢。回答應以主題句直接回應，然後提供一兩個細節說明職業或學習背景。避免冗長或語法錯誤。

例: I used to be a student, but now I work as an industrial designer. I design consumer products at a small firm, and I enjoy solving practical problems with creative solutions.

提案: 回答要用現在或過去時一致（這裡用過去式已可），可以更精確地描述學校位置和環境，並用連接詞讓句子更連貫。避免重複簡單形容詞。

例: I studied in central Taipei; my university is in the city center, so it's compact but always busy. There were many students around and plenty of convenience stores within walking distance.

提案: 句子結構不夠自然，應先直接回答，再給出具體理由或例子。注意語法（例如推薦對象的表達）。使用連接詞提高流暢度。

例: Yes, it's a great place to study because it offers a wide range of courses and strong practical training. For example, the workshops and internship opportunities helped me gain real-world experience.

提案: 可先簡明回答是否想改變，然後列出具體問題和建議改善措施。注意語法和詞序，避免模糊表達（例如“maybe”放在句尾顯得不自信）。

例: Yes, I would change the library. It's quite old and often overcrowded, so adding more seating and updating the facilities would make it much better for students.

提案: 回答已包含計劃，但語句可更流暢並具體說明計劃細節（例如考試名稱、留學目的地、準備方式）。使用連接詞使語意更清晰。

例: I'm currently improving my English to take an important exam in two months, and I plan to study abroad afterward. I'm taking online courses and practicing speaking daily to reach the required level.

× I was a student for past few years and now I have a job as a industrial designer.

✓ I was a student for the past few years and now I have a job as an industrial designer.

错误类型：过去时问题和冠词使用。 解释：原句缺少定冠词“the”应为“the past few years”；“a industrial designer”中的冠词与以元音音素开头的单词不匹配，应该用“an industrial designer”。建议：使用“the past few years”，并将“a”改为“an”。

× I studied in Taipei and my school is located in the middle of Taipei City.

✓ I studied in Taipei, and my school was located in the middle of Taipei City.

错误类型：时态问题。 解释：句子第一部分用过去时“studied”，第二部分用现在时“is located”，时态不一致。描述过去学习经历时应使用过去时“was located”。建议：保持时态一致，改用过去时。

× It is small but full of people and students and lots of convenience stores nearby.

✓ It was small but full of people and students, and there were lots of convenience stores nearby.

错误类型：形容词/副词及句子结构与时态不一致。 解释：继续描述过去的学校应使用过去时“was”。此外原句缺少动词使句子不完整，应加“there were”来说明附近有许多便利店。建议：使用过去时并补充动词短语“there were”。

× I would say yes, I really recommend Senior High School students can choose my university to study because you can learn lots of things in my university.

✓ I would say yes. I really recommend that senior high school students choose my university because they can learn a lot there.

错误类型：句子结构错误与从句搭配错误。 解释：动词“recommend”后应接“that”引导的宾语从句，而不是直接接“can”。此外“Senior High School”不需要大写每个单词，只在专有名词情形使用。用“a lot”比“lots of things”更自然，避免重复“in my university”。建议：使用“recommend that ... choose ...”结构，并使用“a lot/there”。

× I think the most place needs to change is our library because it's a little bit old and the seat is not enough for students to study.

✓ I think the place that needs to change most is our library because it's a little bit old and there aren't enough seats for students to study.

错误类型：介词/短语使用错误与数的一致性。 Explanation in Chinese: 原句中“the most place”结构错误，正确应为“the place that needs to change most”。“the seat is not enough”在英语中应表达为“there aren't enough seats”或“the seats are not enough”，并注意“seat”应为复数以匹配“students”。建议：改为“the place that needs to change most”并使用“there aren't enough seats”。

× Sometimes I have to book the seat maybe.

✓ Sometimes I have to book a seat, maybe.

错误类型：副词位置和冠词使用。 解释：“maybe”放在句尾更自然，但“the seat”暗指特定座位，用不当，应改为不定冠词“a seat”。建议：将“maybe”放在句尾，使用“a seat”。

× Now I'm preparing my English skills to participate in English Examination 2 after two months and I'm planning to go abroad, so I'll try my best.

✓ Now I'm preparing my English skills to take English Examination 2 in two months, and I'm planning to go abroad, so I'll try my best.

错误类型：现在时/动词搭配问题与时间状语表达。 解释：“prepare ... to participate in”搭配显得冗长且不自然，常用“prepare ... to take (an exam)”或“prepare for an exam”。“after two months”应改为更自然的时间状语“in two months”。建议：改为“prepare my English skills to take English Examination 2 in two months”或“prepare for English Examination 2 in two months”。