Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 응답은 명확하지만 문법과 발화의 자연스러움에서 개선이 필요합니다. 두 문장을 연결할 때 쉼표 대신 접속사나 짧은 분리된 문장을 사용하세요. 또한 'on this course'는 어색하므로 'on this course for about two years' 대신 'studying this program for about two years'처럼 표현하세요. 발음에서는 'department of chemistry'나 'been'의 강세를 자연스럽게 연습하세요.

例: I'm a student. I'm studying in the Department of Chemistry and I've been in this program for about two years.

提案: 답변에 문법 오류가 있습니다. 'one of the university'는 복수형을 사용해야 하며, 불필요한 반복을 줄이면 자연스럽습니다. 또한 장소에 대한 간단한 추가 정보(도시나 전공과의 관련성)를 덧붙이면 점수가 올라갑니다.

例: I study at the Catholic University of Korea, which is located in Bucheon. It's one of the leading universities in Korea for science and engineering.

提案: 답변에 어휘와 문법 오류가 있습니다. 'cores'는 아마 'courses'를 의미한 것 같고, 'their facilities is'는 주어·동사 일치 오류입니다. 구체적인 이유(예: 도서관, 실험실)를 추가하면 더 설득력 있고 자연스럽습니다.

例: Yes, definitely. There are a lot of courses I can choose from, and the facilities, such as well-equipped laboratories and a large library, make it a great place to study.

提案: 반복과 어색한 연결 표현을 줄이세요. 'very good place to study so'는 자연스럽지 않습니다. 짧게 핵심을 말하고, 가능하면 한 가지 구체적 이유를 덧붙이면 더 좋습니다.

例: No, not really. I'm very satisfied with my university because it has excellent facilities and supportive professors, so I wouldn't want any major changes.

提案: 문법과 시제 사용에 주의하세요. 'a exchange student'는 'an exchange student'이고, 'in this year and after this course'와 'I will back in Korea'는 어색합니다. 계획의 흐름을 명확히 하고 구체적인 나라나 전공 관련 목표를 추가하면 좋습니다.

例: I'm planning to study abroad this year as an exchange student, and after completing that program I will return to Korea to continue my studies in chemistry.

× I'm a student now, I'm in the department of chemistry and I've been on this course for about two years now.

✓ I'm a student. I'm in the Department of Chemistry, and I've been on this course for about two years.

The original contains run-on sentences and inconsistent capitalization. Separate independent clauses with a period or appropriate conjunction and capitalize proper nouns (Department of Chemistry). Also keep tense and modality consistent. Suggestion: split into two sentences or use 'and' with a comma.

× I study in the Catholic University of Korea.

✓ I study at the Catholic University of Korea.

Use 'at' for institutions such as universities and schools in English. 'In' is used for inside a building or country, but 'at' is the correct preposition for attending an institution.

× It is one of the university in Korea.

✓ It is one of the universities in Korea.

When indicating one among many, use the plural 'universities' after 'one of the'. Also include the article 'the' before 'universities in Korea' is already present; here correct form is 'one of the universities in Korea.' Ensure noun number matches the expression.

× Yes, definitely. There are a lot of cores that I can choose and their facilities is very good to study.

✓ Yes, definitely. There are a lot of courses that I can choose from, and their facilities are very good for studying.

'Cores' is likely a mistranslation; use 'courses.' Add 'from' after 'choose.' 'Facilities' is plural so use 'are' (subject-verb agreement). Use 'for studying' to express purpose; 'to study' is less natural here.

× No, not really. I'm very satisfied with my university because it is very good place to study so.

✓ No, not really. I'm very satisfied with my university because it is a very good place to study.

Missing article 'a' before 'very good place.' Remove the trailing 'so' which is unnecessary and makes the sentence awkward. Maintain natural word order.

× Well, I'm planning to study abroad as a exchange student in this year and after this course.

✓ Well, I'm planning to study abroad as an exchange student this year after this course.

Use 'an' before a vowel sound: 'an exchange student.' 'In this year' is unnatural; use 'this year.' Reorder 'this year' and 'after this course' to be clear: 'this year after this course' or 'after this course this year.'

× I will back in Korea and study chemistry.

✓ I will be back in Korea and study chemistry.

The verb 'be' is missing after 'will.' Use future continuous or simple future with 'will be back.' Correct form: 'I will be back in Korea and will study chemistry' or shorten second 'will.'