Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu sự tự nhiên trong cách diễn đạt. Bạn nên chú ý đến việc sử dụng mạo từ và số nhiều đúng cách, đồng thời tránh lặp lại cụm từ giống nhau.

例: I am currently a student at Ventura High School, which is one of the best high schools in my city.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là thì động từ và cấu trúc câu. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên được hoàn chỉnh, tránh để dang dở. Bạn cũng nên sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

例: I study at a high school that is considered one of the best in my city. It has excellent teachers and modern facilities, so I really enjoy learning there because the environment is supportive and friendly.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không được truyền đạt hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và có liên kết logic giữa các ý.

例: Definitely yes. The school has dedicated teachers and friendly classmates. Because we share the same goals, the atmosphere is very motivating and competitive.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý và tránh lỗi lặp từ.

例: No, I am quite satisfied with the current atmosphere. However, I hope that in the future, the school will improve its infrastructure to provide more opportunities for learning new things.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa bị mơ hồ. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp.

例: I plan to study near my hometown instead of going abroad. I want to enroll in a university close to home and major in accounting.

× Now I'm a student at Ventura High School, which is one of the best high school in my city.

✓ Now I'm a student at Ventura High School, which is one of the best high schools in my city.

The noun 'high school' should be plural 'high schools' because it refers to one among many schools in the city. This is a singular/plural agreement issue.

× Now I'm study in a high school which is one of the best high school in my city.

✓ Now I study in a high school which is one of the best high schools in my city.

The verb 'am study' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I study' for present simple tense. Also, 'high school' should be plural 'high schools' as it refers to one among many.

× It's had excellent teachers and modern infrastructure.

✓ It has excellent teachers and modern infrastructure.

The phrase 'It's had' incorrectly uses past tense 'had' instead of present perfect or present simple. Since the context is current, 'It has' is appropriate.

× Now I'm study in a high school which is one of the best high school in my city.

✓ Now I study in a high school which is one of the best high schools in my city.

As above, 'high school' should be plural 'high schools' to indicate one among many.

× I really enjoy studying there because the environment is very supportive and friendly. I.

✓ I really enjoy studying there because the environment is very supportive and friendly.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'I.' which is incomplete and causes sentence structure error. Removing the extra 'I.' corrects the sentence.

× Definitely yes. The atmosphere there is very perfect from dedicated teacher to friendly friends on the because we study in the same atmosphere so that we also share other goals to achieve more competitive.

✓ Definitely yes. The atmosphere there is perfect, from dedicated teachers to friendly friends, because we study in the same environment and share common goals to become more competitive.

The phrase 'very perfect' is incorrect because 'perfect' is an absolute adjective and cannot be modified by 'very'. Also, 'teacher' should be plural 'teachers'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× No, I don't think so. I'm very satisfied with the the atmosphere now. However, in the future it is had a trend.

✓ No, I don't think so. I'm very satisfied with the atmosphere now. However, in the future it will have a trend.

'It is had a trend' is incorrect; the correct future tense is 'it will have a trend'. Also, duplicate 'the' is removed.

× I want that my school will improve our infrastructures so that we can have more opportunity to learn new things.

✓ I want my school to improve its infrastructure so that we can have more opportunities to learn new things.

'I want that' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I want my school to...'. 'Our infrastructures' should be 'its infrastructure' because the school is singular. 'Opportunity' should be plural 'opportunities' to match the context.

× You are almost my friend. Plan that they will study abroad.

✓ My friends plan to study abroad.

The original sentences are unclear and ungrammatical. The corrected sentence conveys the intended meaning clearly and correctly.

× However, I want to study near my house near my city so that I register in an university and my major will be an accountant.

✓ However, I want to study near my house, near my city, so that I can register at a university and my major will be accounting.

'Register in an university' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'register at a university'. Also, 'an university' should be 'a university' because 'university' starts with a consonant sound. 'Major will be an accountant' is incorrect; it should be 'major will be accounting' because 'accountant' is a profession, not a major.